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I have to say that i am loving this stroy soooo much. It just fills me with buttierflies. The relationship has developed so well.

Realy hope ypu continue this story. Love it<3. The

Oh my god that was so amazing!!! I reallyliked this chapter^^ So Can't wait for the next!!! But Donny still could have prepared regulus a but for this full luna poor guy is totally overwelmed!!! And I really liked how Ash totally lost it!!!! That was great!!! I really want him to mate too^^ See you again soon!!!!

Found a mis-named part-

"Naturally." Hades said smugly, but I could hear a hesitation in his tone.

"What is it, Ares?" (Ares should really be Hades here, right?)

"Well...don't you think it's about time you seeking out a mate of your own?"

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As for the chapter itself...it was friggin glorious to see Ash snapping Erebus out of his funk. I'm super curious as to how his Hades looks, as well. He seems loyal enough to Donny that I don't even care about his violent demeanor just yet.

And dagnabbit Donny...blasted heat. I hope everything turns out alright.

Awesome , just awesome. I love this story. Plz update soon aka now :D

I wouldn't mind it end up being a twosome (maybe for the best because it feels like Erebus would be more like a third wheel than another mate in the threesome), but I also feel bad for Erebus if he will just be taken out of the picture after Donny decides on Regulus. ...Perhaps you could get Erebus to shack with someone else?

I won't lie to start this. I have left series for threesomes. Mainly because the threesome wasn't disclosed from the start. But I've been wondering how you you were going to be coming full circle and get them a set of three. I can see how Donny would be torn and want both. But the other two.... I think you need to write without a restriction of two versus three. I personally hope for 2. But if in the process of your righting you think that Ere will be able to come in and have an equal place then you should. You are at the start. Writing a story backwards is hard. Because you need it to come full circle. By predetermining it's a threesome, you now have decided that they will play a group. But right now your focus is on the main two of these chapters. And if you make a decision now then when Ere comes back into the story, he may or may not mesh well. Your character development comes as they write themselves and experience character lift off. I think you should continue writing and let the characters decide what it should be. Like I said I am totally sold on 2. But I think if the story ends up with it being a well made 3 then I'd love it the same.

Oh a double update!!! That was great!!!!! I reall ylike the twosome idea I love donny and reg together!!! Hope they will be abel to kick die evil alphas ass!!!! And Mors and Ares are also great together^^ Hope we get some more cute fluff like in this chapter^^ And I so can't wait for the full Luna!!! Hope reg will be able to help with the pain!!!! See you again soon!!!

It's cute ow they are bonding like that. So far, I'm hoping they get together instead of the other pair.

OK,now that I'm logged in. Personally, if you ask me, You said 3Plus...Ares, Donny, Mors, and Regulus sounds like four to me. I mean, come on...Ares x Reg? Mors x Donny? Reg x Donny? Ares x Mors? I don't know why people are trying to stuff Erebus and Thanatos in there, too. That's really 6, not 3. That would be more like an orgy to me. Just saying.

don't know how I missed the last update, but woot! I got to read more than one chapter! I am reeeeeeally feeling the Mors x Ares happening. It's a dream come true to me. Backing it 100%! Not that Donny and Reg aren't great together as well, the 2 and their guardians are just great together. Hope they figure out a way to bring Zane down.