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Hm, i find it difficult to find the right words here. Obviously zebs dad is a mean bastard that treat both his son and wife horrible. And about justin and shane: i feel sort of sad for shane here, i don't think he deserves to be treated like this, he doesn't deserve to be hidden away and to see his love with other people. And mandy may or may not be the best person in the world. But she doesn't deserve this either.
I'm a romantic person, but already here I feel this relationship isn't good for anyone. And i can't help thinking justin's a bit of a selfish bastard. Both shane and mandy deserves better than this mess...

Aww feeling the love. Anyway so this chapter is great in the fact that its really just every day dealings (apart from the end but I'll come to that bit later). I just love the fact that you see the jealousy and complexity of a relationship...it's not all wham bang thank you ma'am (or sir) and that's it. Obviously Shane will be jealous no matter how much he know's that Justin loves him, no one wants to see someone else hanging off their boyfriend especially if you can't stake your claim. Also love that he gets the wrong end of the stick because Justin is being slightly over dramatic with apologising.

So to come to the last part, I know people will dislike Zeb's mum because she's not doing anything but she's doing the best she can at the time calling Shane to come and get him...it's still not right and whatever happens, you should protect your child but hey, you don't know what's happeneing to her, so I'm giving her the she's doing the best she can card and calling someone who already showed he cared about her kid. Just makes me hope that both Justin and Shane can help Zeb because they're great guys, take him back to their place or even take him along, because I think if they take him to their flat and leave he seems the type to make a run for it, unless they call Spencer and get him to "babysit". My brain is working a mile a minute but its because they're so amazing and realistic and I'm always waiting to hear more from them.

Big Hugs back to you!

Aduial

Aww, the ending was so cute w/Shane admitting to himself that he was in love with Justin. :)

I liked the part where he got jealous of Greg. lol

I don't know if I totally trust Greg though. He seemed to know more about Zeb than he was letting on. That was obvious when he kept averting his eyes. Thank you, Lie to Me. lol

I hope that Zeb is ok and his father didn't do anything to him.

Great chapter, CL! :)

Bless, it's so cute that he's trying to do the right thing and Justin is with him on it. They are just adorable together. I don't have that much to write today but just letting you know still loving it and wont stop reading!

Hugs Aduial

I'm tied between worried mother hen about Zeb, and going awwww, at the cuteness of them. Please for the love of God help Zeb before it's too late guys.

Reading this story is like an addiction. I'm always left wondering what happened next and waiting for the next chapter! I almost wish I had found this story after if was done so that I could just blow through it!

I've read all of your stories, and have been following this one from the beginning. You're writing style and stories are really engaging and fun. I really hope you stick around and continue posting on this site instead of going the way of the wind!

What a great chapter, CL! :)

Justin admitted his feelings for Shane; he's had feelings for him for quite some time. I mean, turning down scholarships to schools just so he could go to the same school as Shane shows perseverance in his quest to see if he and Shane could be more than just best friends.

Speaking of perseverance, maybe if Shane keeps at Zeb, Zeb will finally tell him what's going on. But, knowing Zeb, he might just close down even more.

Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

aww...haha we have to "talk" card, that is hilarious, poor Shane is just one huge ball of frustration. I'm surprised he hasn't decided to lock himself in a padded room and sing lalalala all day long.

4 more chapter of him! Yay! And then 10 of each of the other two I am soo excited.

Hugs

No, that's exactly what I wanted to happen behind that door. I'm really glad they finally listened to each other. Jeeze he is dense, gotta hit a guy over the head with knowledge before it sinks in. I hope Zeb will be ok, and they can stop whoever is hurting him.

Wow, that could have gone better. I wonder what's gonna happen when he gets on the other side of that door.