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Oh man, I woulda kept pummeling Zeb's sperm donor. I can't believe Zeb called him! He's eighteen! I guess he's so used to being controlled by him that he just didn't want to anger him any more than he already had.

And that other cop - what a d-bag!!

Justin was being so nice and sweet to Zeb. I'm glad Zeb finally was able to relax in front of him.

Great chapter, CL! :)

YAY GO JUSTIN! I am soo flying the flag for him right now! Proper hero, taking out Zeb's horrid dad. Like the cop said I'd have punched him a couple more times. Or if you had time like that woman in the USA who cut of her husband's cock and then put it in the food shredder in the sink...that's what he would deserve ha! ANYWAYS I just adore it, especially you can tell he wants to soothe Shane but on the other side there's a little bit of eye rolling going on when he gets all jealous over Mandy.

I think Justin's an angel with dealing with two nut jobs (excuse the terminology) but he has the patience of a saint. I didn't spot Picking up the Pieces so thank's for the heads up on that one! I shall endevour to read it tomorrow and leave a comment of course. I do adore Matt and Payne so I wont be leaving them in the lurch. I was actually sad that I would only have one of your stories to read now instead of two...now I have two again! Yay its like being on a diet and finding out you have enough calories left for an ice cream when you thought you didn't :D

Hugs Aduial

Jeeze. At least somebody finally punched the douche. Hey is that cop Sam? Also, come on Shane, he's just cuddling, you can join in at any time.

Awe that was so cute~~! I'm glad Justin was the one to walk through the door! I hope that the last cop there doesn't have a say in what is told to the detective! I'm sure after Justin explains to Shane what happened he'll forgive Justin for his screw ups with Mandy. I wonder if Justin is going to tell Shane why Zeb went to that party??? I wonder how Shane will react if he's told? I'm sure if Shane remembers what that punk of a roommate Zeb has he'll remember what that asshole said about the party! Thank YOU for updating!

In regards to chapter 4 all I can think of is the "quantum physics of cock sucking".... now back to the chapter!

Shane and Justin are so funny together. They always make me laugh. :)

Zeb is so lucky they are taking care of him; there's no way he'd be able to do it all on his own. Can he even make it to the bathroom alone? I hope they don't come home and find him lying in the hallway, between the couch and the bathroom.

Hope Zeb doesn't run off, or someone try to get in while they are gone. I'm wary of Zeb's old roommate, something's off with him. Hope his dad doesn't come looking for him as well. That'll stir up a mess of trouble.

Justin's POV is pretty cool too...I love that he frets and that he's doing his little how am I going to balance my lovely gay relationship with being a tough as shit american football player.

And that he's jealous of Zeb. I guess Zeb has the cute hurt lost puppy card that Justin can't pull, plus I feel like he's worried that Shane will get fed up with the hiding and that if Zeb stays with them long enough and gets enough confidence he might find being able to have a boyfriend openly more pleasant than being Justin's "dirty little secret".

Put that in speach marks because well, he isn't that to Justin but you know. Sorry rambling, been a long day. Now I can go to bed.

Hugs Aduial

I'm not even through chapter 2 and I'm laughing my ass off! I had to stop to breath! I also wanted to to tell you how FUCKING FUNNY THAT SHIT WAS! Okay I think I can see now... The tears from laughing are starting to clear up! The whole Shane Jr waving for attention! Then I have limits as to making an ass out of myself before 8am YEAH HEE HAAAAA HEEE oh oh oh LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! Just thought you need to know! heee heeee Thank YOU I needed that!

AGAIN FUNNY! talking his dick off the ledge! OH and my son'd dad say's "CHICKS DIG SCARS!"