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for The Heart Wants

by CL.Mustafic

schedule June 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Zeb's sperm donor is such a monster. And I'm sorry, frightened or not frightened of your husband, by Zeb's mother not protecting him, SHE wasn't doing her job. She should have taken Zeb and left that horrible abuser. Why she would let him hurt her child is something I will never understand. She should have called the cops, packed her bags and Zeb's bags, and never looked back. She's a coward.

I love the emotional and physical support Justin and Shane are giving Zeb. He really needs it.

Now I'm trying to remember (you know, the whole 'old age sucks' thing. lol), Spence was the guy that Matt was with in Payne's story, right? That's why I didn't recognize the name, b/c he was from THIS story! lol

And now you have ANOTHER new story up!!!! I can't keep up, CL!! lol
person Jetfire
schedule June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just managed to read it in jet lagged delirium...still love al three of them, they are such a good combination, next time will be a proper review again I promise, am actually glad I can type straight right about now.

Hugs Aduial
person Tahn
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad. I'm happy to see Matt again. Makes me know that his own story has a happy ending. Now what exactly did his Dad mean? Was he planning to rape his son or was he just going to focus his abuse on his rear? Poor Shane is probably not going to let go of that guilty feeling for a long time. I do like that he seems ok with the shared affection, hoping the three of them can get together and overcome this.
person lele
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I saw that coming a mile away. Shane coming home and see how they were in the room. Zeb's dad is really horrible. I hope he doesn't get a chance to finish what he started. Still confused as to why he called him. Good job, can't wait for more.
person lele
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
*tears* Wow, how could his dad do that? I wonder if he meant he was going to kill him? Outstanding work and can't wait for more.
person Tahn
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, what's Zeb gotten into in there? Please press charges man, the guy needs to be put behind bars.
person Jetfire
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love Justin, I love that he's going to try and come up with a way for the three of them to be together, its going to be so cute, though he's going to have both hands full (no pun intended there either :D) Ok...so maybe I get a little bit violent...a tad...but still can't stand people who are nasty and beat on people weaker then them. ANYWAY, Justin really is like you said the most mature, he's always so sensible...even when he really wants to have sex with Shane he doesn't because he's so caring (which is one of the reason he can be forgiven for staying in the closet).

I'll be going back to work this week, travelling round the world, incase I miss updates (and miss making reviews) because unfortunatly I keep having to go to (bloody) Saudi Arabia and places like that where AFF is blocked, I haven't stopped reading and I will catch up and let you feel the love, so, even if I don't leave one because I haven't been able to read and review, you know you'll get one a little later.

Loads of Huggins for you

Aduial
person anon-ish
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW a cliffy!~ OH and Matt's going to be in the picture! WOW that's just to cool~! thank YOU for updating!
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, (pardon the pun! :)), what did Zeb do?

I'm so excited Matt's working on Zeb's case!! Hey, he and Lex should work on it together! lol

So now Matt's working on two cases. lol

Great chapter, CL!! :)

Oh, and btw - my computer totally combusted due to all the hotness between Shane and Justin. :)
person Mona Thompson
schedule June 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww my poor little Zeb...my heart breaks for this kid:( Gods I would love to punch his fucking dad...I have seen a few situations similar to Zebs and it kills me to see someone get beat on because of who they like. I mean who the fuck cares RIGHT? Why does it bother people...who someone else wants to be with? I will never understand it. NEVER. I have always wondered if the people who get all riled up over it are just mad because they prefer company of the same sex as theirs but they cant be honest about it so they take it out on people who are happy and open with who they are and who they love no matter the consequences. Its so sad. So im nervous to find out who invited Zeb to the party but I also cant wait for them to get their asses handed to them! Update soon please♥