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for The Heart Wants

by CL.Mustafic

person Ishtani
schedule July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I am a huge fan of you work. Just all of it. It's awesome. Second of all, I'm not normally a fan of three-way relationships but I like how this story has been laid out and the way the three characters interact is very well developed. I look forward to reading the rest!
person Jetfire
schedule July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Did I review the last chapter? I can't remember, I read it at 3 am in Nice so, not sure if I did or didn't but I love it and its cute and I love Zeb and I can't wait for more. So if I did review, I hope it was a long one, if I didn't this is to let you feel the love.

Hugs Aduial
schedule July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, Shane's gonna be pissed! Although, knowing him, he'll just get turned on by it. Like Zeb said, he doesn't mind being used for their foreplay. lol

I hope Zeb can get some help with schooling. Too bad the school doesn't have a scholarship fund for kids who were abused by their parents.
person Tahn
schedule July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Zeb is an evil little thing :D But he's so cute ^_^
person lele
schedule July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow.....this is a great story. I can't wait for more.
person anon-ish
schedule July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love how you make your story's characters know each other in some way... I'm thrilled to know that Matt and Payne will get married! I wonder if our three boys will get to know them more? Poor Zeb gosh I feel for that kid! Shane is just too cute in that is he for real sort of deal... How Justin is going to juggle all of this plus those two WOW OH and let's not for get Mandy how is that shit gonna fly????? love the crazyness! Thank YOU for updating!
schedule July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved this last chapter, CL! :)

I was so happy to read that Matt and Payne (not to be confused with Shane, lol), got their HEAs and they're together. :)

The ending was pretty funny with Zeb saying that Shane and Justin are weird for each getting turned on by his kissing the other (did that make sense? lol)

On a more serious note, I hope the counselors at the center can help Zeb. Zeb really needs to want help in order for the therapy to work though.
person Tahn
schedule July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
They are so adorable with their kiss sharing. Makes me go awww.
person Mona Thompson
schedule July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I think I just made the connection! Picking up the pieces ring a bell? Holy fuck!!! So does this take place years later? Matt and payne end up married? Shit! Shit ! Shit! I love it!♥
person Jetfire
schedule July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww I love the fact that you have included Matt and Payne. I didn't connect to the fact that Matt was the detective, but that is soo cool. I hope Shane, Justin and Zeb will become a cute threesome, because they are so adorable together.

Love that Zeb is getting his snarky side back again, you have to love his snarkyness. Anyway, I'm boiling to death so my brain review function is shutting itself down (it's 40 degrees celsius here).

Can't wait to read more

Hugs Aduial