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for The Heart Wants

by CL.Mustafic

person Lunar
schedule September 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Quick! Post the other chapters!
schedule September 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Zeb! Thank God he has Justin and Shane on his side. Payne too. :) And Matt of course.

Love his new makeover - especially the mascara! lol

I can't believe his mother would ask him to drop the charges on his sperm donor. He should rot in jail being tortured by Big Bubba every day. His asshole sperm donor is probably pressuring his mother, that's why she's trying to get in contact with Zeb.

Another great chapter, CL! :)
person Tahn
schedule September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I see how it is, throwing me under the bus like that. Mmhmm. :D I'm glad you decided to post it though, good job ^_^
schedule September 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVED seeing Payne!!!! :) I'm so happy he's back to his happy-go-lucky personality and style. :)

I'm sure Mandy will be a very good friend to Justin. It's too bad everything has to get swept under the rug though. These schools put these jocks on such a pedestal, it's like they can do no wrong.

Great chapter, CL! :)
schedule September 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, my computer froze last night after I wrote my review, so I wrote another one just now. I see that AFF did take my original review though, so oh well, now you have two from me for the same chapter. lol
schedule September 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, CL!

I'm so glad Mandy wasn't a bitch to Justin after he came out to her. And hey, doesn't every girl need a gay best male friend? lol

I also loved seeing Payne here! Love the way he expresses himself. :) But why were he and Zeb gone all day?
person Tahn
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Punchies! Take that Greg! I really hope they all get what's coming to them.
person Cyarsonix
schedule August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the video. Justin doesn't need zeb technically. He took a video. I mean it's like the gun in writing. If it appears in one act it should go off in another right?
schedule August 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think Shane and Justin will take that challenge from Zeb. lol Little perv. :)

I absolutely LOVED reading about Charles and Lynn again, but I especially loved seeing Graham again! And now he's with Erik! :) That made me smile. :)
person Tahn
schedule July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, prove it? Zeb, do you know what you ask?