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for The Heart Wants

by CL.Mustafic

person Tahn
schedule January 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Poor Zeb always feeling left out. They are gonna lose their minds when they figure out what he wants them to do.
person Tahn
schedule January 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Can the uncle have an unfortunate accident on his way home? Pretty please?
schedule December 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26:

Jeezus, Zeb! Grow a fucking backbone and tell your slimebag of an uncle you will NOT go with him and he can press all the fucking charges he wants, HE'S the one who'll be locked up!

Justin and Shane better stop Zeb from doing this ridiculously stupid thing. Please, if it ever got to trial, and all the abuse of his "uncle" and his sperm donor came to light, Zion will be in the big house being Big Bubba's bitch.

Ok, next chapter. lol
schedule December 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That's terrific that Zeb has some money now. :) Maybe it'll help him not feel so worthless.

I'm thrilled Justin was able to "coerce" the asshole uncle to leave. Zeb really needs to go on the stand and tell his story. About his sperm donor AND his "uncle".

Great chapter, CL! :)
person Tahn
schedule December 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
NO! No no no no no. Oh evil uncle needs to die.
person Lunar
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I feel like this story is going the wrong way now. The father is dead, shouldn't we now be on the road of healing instead of throwing him into another rape situation? I don't know if you thought of something else that happens in the next chapters so the uncle gets dealt with so I will read the next couple of chapters but if it ends with the uncle raping Zed then I will most likely stop reading this story..
person jit
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know you said Zeb was in for a bit if a roller coaster ride, but knowing where to find a bit more just a bit sooner than here, I think you have mislead us and Zeb is on a speeding train that has just run out of track. I have to agree with earlier reviewer.. Dad's dead, now can we kill off uncle? I'd volunteer to help hide the body, if that helps. Please keep these updates coming quickly.. my fingers are getting tired from dangling over the edge of these cliffs..I am so glad you are working on this again.. Thanks.
person Tahn
schedule December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad she did it. He deserved it. Can we kill off the uncle now?

Also, yay! I had the best brithday ever. Thank you so very very much :D
schedule December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That wasn't the end of the story, was it? The way the chapter ended it sounded like the end of the story.

I hope not though -- I want to see Zeb's mom walk away. There's no way a jury would convict her of murder. Benning has got to pull the abuse card -- her abuse and her son's abuse.

Awesome chapter, CL. I was literally sitting at the edge of my chair, scrolling down very slowly so I didn't miss anything. lol
person Tahn
schedule December 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit CL. Did his dad kill his mom?