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Love it, so you're getting this review for both Gavin and Lex and this one. I was still completely out of it, so:

Gavin and Lex...you just loove Lex's mum she's amazing and I'm so glad Gavin has come out and that he's now reached the pissed off point, I hope its going to be as funny as it is in my head because Cassie should hope the police find her before Gavin does. I hope he goes to stay with Lex, just because they can have maybe some smexing....or just some humping, everything is fine because its just a cute storyline it doesn't matter that there's not so much sex. Thanks again for your wonderful story lines.

The Heart Wants: I had so many OMG moments during this chapter, I can't even begin to say how much is going through my mind right now, so these are all retorical questions. Is Justin in love with Shane? Will Shane blurt out his gay feelings because he said he has verbal diarrhoea? What on earth is happening with Zeb and hopefully Shane will be able to help him. Its so cliffy that I'm just sitting here wanting another chapter to pop up! Thank you thank you thank you :*

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I too was excitedto see a new one from you. I like this so far but I hope it doesn't mean that the updates on your other one will stop or slow down. I have to know how lex and the docs story ends.

Poor Zeb. Where did he get all those scars? And why were the ones on his forearms different? Why did Shane feel like the scars looked familiar or something?

I just can't picture Justin, a six-foot-something football player, being sorta picked on by anyone. lol

And when you said physic major, did you mean psych major? :)

Can't wait for chapter three! :)

Very very...oooh I can't find the right words for it. I actually thought it was only going to be three chapters but now its going to be 30 soo you cannot believe how happy I am about that. I love the way you properly develop your characters...if I wanted to just read porn I'd go into the porn section of this site, so anyone who gives you a hard time, can suck cock or whatever...personally I think they can go sit in a cold cold freezer and freezes their evil little fingers off. Can't wait for next chapter.

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I want to comment first on your author's note and want to say that I appreciate that it will slowly build up to... the naughty stuff! I'm the type that will read anything so long as the story line is good. If there's sex in the first paragraph, that's fine. If not, that's fine too!

So far, so good! Although I'm a bit confused as far as Shane's orientation (which I'm pretty sure will be addressed later on so you don't have to answer that right now). I can see that he has something that is a bit more than just friends with Justin but nothing that is obvious or possibly oblivious to Justin! I found it... kinda cute, really!

Then, he's confusing himself with these sudden thoughts on Zeb. So, now I get the feeling that he's somewhat confused as far as his sexuality.

Overall, this is nice and funny!

Well, this new story certainly cheered me up! Thanks, CL! lol

I already love Shane; he seems so sweet and caring. I think most guys, if paired with someone like Zeb, who seems angry and distant, wouldn't bother trying to strike up a conversation with them.

I look forward to the next part. :)

Very cool, love it and can't wait for the next chapter from a different point of view.

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Yay! I'm so happy to see this here :3

I'm curious how this one is gonna turn out, and why he's wearing a hoodie. Is he hiding something I wonder? Not gonna be much cover to hide behind in a swimsuit.