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for The Heart Wants

by CL.Mustafic

person Jo
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! This is the worst cliffhanger EVER! Now we have to wait, what? 4 days before next chapter ;_; ??
person Jetfire
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I sort of went noooo and then awww and then nooo and argh and its a whole up and down and turn around but its part of a good story, even if I didn't like the abuse scene (obviously because of the abuse but there was a warning) I still read it because its important to the characters. So anyway, I doubt it will be as easy as Shane just saying I love you too unless they take Zeb into their midst and he's the complicated one.

Thank you

Hugsyss
Aduial
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. I did have a feeling that Justin wasn't totally straight either, but I really didn't think that he would think Shane would figure it out and bang every chick in school so people didn't think he was gay/bi either. Wow, that was some twist at the end, CL!

What about Zeb though? Does Shane think he's in love with him too, or does Shane feel more protective of him than in love with him?

And speaking of Zeb - he really needs some heavy duty counseling if his "parents" have been brainwashing him that he would deserve poor treatment just b/c he's gay. What sick "parents" he has. Poor Zeb. He really needs a friend or two now.

Excellent chapter, CL - as always! :)

You always leave me wanting more!!!
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, poor Shane. He's all screwed up. Didn't he ever hear of bi? lol

Zeb's roommate is a total ass. I'm glad that Zeb tries to stand up for himself and not back down to him. :)
person Tahn
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on, it's obvious he's thinking about you like that too, just man up and do something about it.
person Jo
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, things are so complicated. Now i just wish shane and justin could have some real fun together xD or at least realise they want the same thing...look forward to next chapter! Your stories is what really makes my days :*
person Jetfire
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
HA! I soo did read that in an omnious tone! The voices in my head agree that this is brilliant and that we love Shane because he is adorably confused and slightly awkward, well all except the one that's sitting in the corner cackling manically.
I also love Zeb because well I can't say why but I love the little demonic boy, he needs to do more confusing of Shane :D...that was from the corner.

So anyway I love the fact that you have to more stories planned for the characters from Loving Sarajevo because that means I want have to end up high and dry if you suddenly stop posting your well written storylined fiction. If you ever decide to leave this site and move somewhere else, please please please post a notice because I shall avidly follow you. If I knew how to add something to my recommended reading list on my profile I would add all your stories.

TONS of Crazy Hugs

Aduial
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shane. I don't think he even knows what or who he wants.

And poor Zeb. Zeb definitely needs a friend, but I don't know how Shane is going to redeem himself in Zeb's eyes.

Was Justin too drunk to remember what happened the night before?

Can't wait for more, CL! :) I LOVE this story!!!!
person Jo
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing but I'm almost addicted to this new story. My imagination is just flowing...what? When? Why? Oh there are so many questions! :D and i love your new form when each character has their own part. So far my only problem is I'm not into polygami so I can't make enough couples in my happily-ever-after imaginary ending. Hope this wasn't too confusing to read! ;)
person Tahn
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, someone's a bit confused, and I don't think it's just the one roommate either. I hope Zeb loosens up a bit to realize he's not trying to hurt him, and opens up.