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I love the bit you threw in at the end about the heat getting what it wants. Good job tying it all together :D I look forward to seeing how his treatment goes. Good luck ^_^

Great ending. I have mix feelings b/c I am curious to the future esp of Zeb & his mum. Good work.

Wonderful epilogue, CL! :) I'm curious though how different the new doctor's therapy is going to be, but as long as it helps Zeb, that's all that matters. :) This was such an excellent story, CL, and I love the way it ends in Shane's POV, just like it started. You're such a gifted writer with a wonderful imagination. I'm so glad you found AFF. :) Oh, and I meant to ask you: why did you change your username? Just wonderin'...

FINALLY!!!!! Zeb confesses his love and so do J&S!!! :) That's just what Zeb needed to hear. He needs to know that there are people there who love him and want to be with him. He needs to push his past out of his mind and concentrate on his new future, a future where people love him unconditionally. :) What a great chapter this was, CL! I totally loved it! :)

Aww, that little, "forever" thing was adorable. I know what you have planned for the sequel, and I'll support whatever direction you choose to take it. Best of writing luck to you :D

Oh my God, Zeb was so funny telling his therapist he wanted two dicks inside him at the same time. She was just as comical by throwing it right back to him. lol I would think that Zeb is gonna need like a whole bottle of Advil after this! I'm really glad it worked out though, because he really wanted to feel that closeness with both of them. :) What a great b-day present for Justin! :)

Oh, I meant to ask: how do I give you cat pokes?

I hope you can stop being worried about disappointing readers by continuing your stories, and letting your characters grow and change.If you disappoint some, then so be it. I'm pretty sure that there will still be a bunch of us still here for the long haul, come what may... Go for the sequel; the end of this one is too soon for me, as it is... Besides, these guys are going to show up somewhere else, anyway, may as well be in their own story (or stories.)

How are they going to be able to prove to him that they love him? I get that he's insecure, but it's not like they are gonna kick him out or hurt him. I just wish he could see that.

Awww, what a funny chapter, CL! Zeb and Payne in a sex store! lol Payne is just too funny! :)

I was a bit taken aback when Zeb confessed he wanted to drop out of college to go to cosmetology school. But if that's what he wants, then he should go for it.

It's really going to be hard for him having to go up on the stand and defend his mom. Of course I don't know what jury in the world would convict his mom after what they have both been through with that scumbag of a "husband" and sperm donor.

The ending was so cute. Zeb's so cute trying to get ready for a DP. lol Shane will definitely be surprised (as well as Justin, of course), when Zeb lets them know what he really wants. :)