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for Along the Underground

by Alasdair-you

person Anon
schedule April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this story is just incredible to say the least! I think I'm even in thrilled! Thank YOU for sharing!
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I meant in thralled!
person BreZ
schedule April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I almost combusted when reading chapter 7, it was almost too hot to handle! I'm loving your story and I will be looking forward to every update :D
person Tahn
schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, how is he not a virgin indeed.
schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You posted two chapters while I was gone for two days! Oh boy I <3 that Arkady is stronger than Finn lol don't know why but it tickles me to no end. I laughed out loud at the troll under the bridge part because it's like something so cheesy that I might have written it myself. :D Still loving the story...

CL
schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It cut off my last review so I'm going to try again. I <3 that Arkady is stronger than Finn, it tickles me to no end for some reason. I actually LOL'd at the troll under the bridge part, it's like something so cliched and cheesy that it reminds me of something I'd have written. :D Still loving this..

CL
person Tahn
schedule April 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Eek, don't threaten his cuddle bunny, jeeze. Gonna hafta get some control over that, or he's gonna get in trouble.
person Tahn
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, cuddles, how sweet.
person cl mustafic
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have to admit Arkady is adorable. I'm totally hooked and I really hope that you're not the type to write like five chapters and leave your readers hanging. So from now on I'm going to fangirl you hard for updates. No really I'm liking it, so you just keep writing and I'll keep reading.

CL
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love those story so far. The humor and characters are great. If you having a mailing list please add me. I can't wait to see what will happen. Xoxo Robin