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for Along the Underground

by Alasdair-you

person MizuAz
schedule April 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING this story! I hope you're still planning on adding to it. I know you're working on Beauty in the Ashes. I really enjoyed Along the Underground, as well, and I'll be starting the sequel once there are a few more chapters. I was happy to find this little gem in between the two, though. This is an intense point in the story! You're obviously a very prolific writer, so I hope you haven't dropped this one because I'm all wrapped up in these interesting characters and I need to know what's going to happen!! Thanks for bringing your talented imagination to the masses!
person Jess
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling a threesome coming soon. I love Finn and Ace but hearing Rowan's story made me thing a threesome won't be so bad for these guys. Keep up the good work!
person Candigirl
schedule April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And now I'm stuck on this fix and OH MY GOD IS THIS GOING TO BE A THREESOME FIC?!?!? I mean Finn is obviously so in love with them both and the way Ace was clinging to Rowan and the little fire of chemistry the two has, and then Rowan calls him 'Ace' like he's one of them and it is beyond cute!!! And I'm so sorry, my inner fan girl just went crazy and shipped the three of them! ^^' anyways, keep up the good work! You have me drooling over here!
person li
schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh wao, so much happened in those three chapters. I went to PR for a week so when I started crying because Rowan was hurt my husband thought it was because I miss my family. The thing is that I did feel like somebody very dear was hurt and I cannot stop thinking about it. I really feel bad for the little one wing angel. On the other hand Finn and Arkady are sweet together and Ace could really use a break. Your boys are all lovable, so now that we have background music I am going to tumblr.
person Tahn
schedule April 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope Rowan can help Arkady learn to control it before something bad comes for them.
person Mint
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahh noo Rowan! I think I like the love story between him and Finn more than Finn and Arkady. Arkday is adorable, and I do love the dynamics between him and Finn, but he's also just so young especially with all he's gone through, I'd hoped he could have a bit of a normal human life before all this fairy stuff, but doesn't seem like normalcy is ever going to be in the cards for him. And Rowan is terrifying and tragic and that does me in. Still, I guess he might be too far gone to ever rekindle with Finn what he had, so maybe it's not even a possibility anyway. Still, he saved him, ahh! And Arkady, hard to believe that he was being constantly tortured in a research facility not long ago, now he can do all this. Furthermore the bad guys are frightening and intriguing, I almost want Finn to get captured just to see what the Winter Court is like.

Anyway I love this story and all the awesome characters. And I especially love the frequent updates! Thank you!
person Tahn
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, he saved him. Maybe it'll be ok when he gets better?
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was quite the fight! I hope Rowan makes it... I wonder if Ellis and him will fall for each other... Did they know each other before Finn and him met??? Is Finn going to have to choose???? Is Arkady really as strong as Ellis or stronger? Does Arkady have another person inside him is that why his voice sounds different when he's mad? Does Arkady really not know what's really going on in the courts or why he was sent out into the world???? These are things I need to know.... PLEASE?????
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
once again you have out done yourself! I love the angst of this some what love triangle... I am wondering though who is Arkady's mom my guess is the never queen... I'm also guessing that Rowan isn't quite through with Finn in a sense that he won't let Finn go again he did say he was selfish.... I also think the winter queen sent Arkady to kill Finn because Finn has a hidden power he doesn't know about yet... I'm probably wrong but i'll keep reading to find out!
person Jess
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused about how Ace got here. Who took him and why?