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for Along the Underground

by Alasdair-you

person Candigirl
schedule March 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this story but seriously can't this just be a ménage? I know Finn, Rowan, and Ace would be beautiful together! Thanks for the updates, love!
person Lunar
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This chapter confused me a little in the way it was written. I gather that the Never wueen is Arkady's mother but the way it id written makes it seem like you are talking about the winter queen, but maybe that's just me..
person anon~ish
schedule February 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was WOW I am loving the king!!!! I really do feel for Rowan... is he and the king going to .... YOU know???? I want to get to Finn almost as much as Ace and Rowan but I am enjoying the story between then and when we meet Finn??? again. Awesome as always THANK YOU for updating!!!
person smint45
schedule February 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!!! I really like aces father he seems like a good guy!!!! I hope they will be able to save Finn non the less!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
person Jess
schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I MISSED THIS!!! Keep up the great work :)
person Jess
schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So so so good! How long has Finn been away from Ace(in both worlds)? I miss him but I am loving Rowan!
person Lunar
schedule January 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yay, updates! I was a little scared to start reading this when I saw you started this story a couple of years ago but I guess it is off from hiatus since you updated quite quickly? I hope so at least!

I'm not against this ending up as a three some with Finn Rowan and Arkady *hint hint*
person MizuAz
schedule January 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh why did I get all wrapped into this again!? It's not finished! ! And it's soooooo good! A lot of writers who try their hand at high fantasy just can't get it quite right. It takes real talent to make the flow just right, some knack for words to keep that edge of silliness at bay. You write so well, with a gritty realness
person MizuAz
schedule January 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Damned phone keypad! Anyway...you're awesome talented and I know authors hate to be rushed but your audience is very in to this world and we need more! Please don't abandon us for so long that I forget what's going on and have to reread everything for the third time! Not that it's a bad thing, really, but I want more!!! Thank you for giving us this great story!
schedule January 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read the new updates yet because I have to start over from the beginning but I wanted to drop in and tell you I'm so glad you're back! I can't wait to read the new chapters!

CL