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for Along the Underground

by Alasdair-you

person Jess
schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Memorizing and beautiful yet sometimes heartbreaking is what I think of when it comes to your work.  I am so saddened for Finn, if or when he ever goes back to being who he was - he will be broken from what he has done. His heart will break and I can only hope the last two people who love him most in that world will be able to put him back together. 

ATU and the BITA universe are addicting! Keep up the great work!

person smint45
schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god a nw chapter^^ Fantastic!!! I'm so happy!!!  I really love this story!!!! But it's so short :( Thank you so much for the chapter, not so much for the chliffy ;) Hope to see you again soon!!!

person Jess
schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

No no no not Finn! That was heartwrenching! How can they save Finn? He's doomed by the summer court - how do they not take action against him even after he might hopefully go back to normal? Even if he is saved from the court, how will he ever be okay again?

You definatly put your characters thru the ringer. I guess if you didn't then there would be no story and I happen to adore your stories :)

person HideAndGoSeek
schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You are not an author afraid of ripping out the hearts of your readers and fundamentally destroying your characters, are you? I give you so many props as an author for having the strength (and heartlessness) to break the story mold like you do but I want happy endings! You anyways throw in the monkey wrench that screws up my vision of the ending. I love that you stay unpredictable that way (WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CHOP OFF FOX'S HEAD WHY WHY WHY) but please tell me there's a happy ending? You strike me as a "and some of them lived on and had a moderately okay life filled but were still haunted by their past" kind of author rather than a "happily ever after" one. Anyway, now that I'm done analyzing your writing style....I loved the chapter! Except the part where you made Finn evil, took 3 years away from Ace and Rowan, and sent the people who love Finn the most to go kill him because there is no other alternative....but other than crushing my soul it was great! I can't wait to read more and chip more of my heart away!

person Seth
schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I can't even express how happy I am to see this getting new chapters. And wow, what great chapters they are!

person Jess
schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

YAY - you're back!!! Please continue - loving it so far!

person Lunar
schedule March 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yes Arkady,you go and propose that threesome!I sm eagerly awaiting the next chapter so please update soon!
person The_CL
schedule March 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh so so good! I can see a threesome in the near future eh? Not so patiently awaiting the next chapter. CL
person smint45
schedule March 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! I still hold my hope for the threesome up!!! That would be really amazing!!! Can't wait fro the smutt in the next chapter!!! See you again soon!!
schedule March 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU'RE BACK! Thank you for the update! I can't wait to see what happens. Totally in love with this story.