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for Ghost of the Cascade Mountains

by Delphyne

person Diaval the shape shifter raven
schedule March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Does Ghost know/care that his apprentice is dead? And what exactly is role(singer?) I can't picture a wild boy with teesh filed into fangs as a Gayly singing minstrel regailing others with happy tunes. And are Ghosts people only invading because they hate magic?
So many questions, please update and reveal some more details! Interesting opening, waiting to find out more to form a solid opinion, though I tentatively like the description of your characters.
person Noname
schedule March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy a good antagonistic beginning! I hope the the tension doesn't fizzle away too quickly!