rate_review Reviews

I like the Story very much. They are both very hot, maybe hate will Turn into something other...

Wow, that's an awesome story! I agree with most of the reviews - keep it up (and I love quick updates like anyone else, as long as the quality of your story doesn't suffer of course)!! I kinda like the point of view from Pyths perspective right now. If Ghost is in danger from his own people because of his magic I guess he needs to change sides after the bond took a hold, and befriend his new Master eventually (but hopefully not too soon :D )
(I also liked the one review telling you about spelling errors but typing so bad I couldn't read it well…haha)

It will be interesting seeing where their relationship goes after starting in such a harsh place!

Interesting, you paint a detailed world with intriguing characters. I can't wait to read more.

I'm so hooked on this,I just can't wait for the next chapter.makes me glad I started reading this! More please!

Lots of emotions goin on here. I wonder why all that magic has 2 come from sum1 els. I mean if summoning the dragon didnt kill the guy I don't c how he couldn't recover. Also, I hope that w all the rapieness going on that they can get along later on:( finally: why the sharpend teeth??? I know its a cool idea but in reality it would make eating a huge hazard- and infection would b a almost assurd due 2 the teeth biting the tongue or cuttin the gums so much... Maybe it could add later 2 the fix 2 get them fixt(poor ghost not happy- but definitely better 4 him). I wonder if the dragon will feel bad when he finds out all ghost did is watch the battle & that he's just a singer, not a warrior or scout, & that he hides his powers out of fear for his life. I hope so. A little compassion on both their sides would go a long way. Thank 4 the quick update & hope 4 another soon
Rukia

Oo well that was a really cool start!!! I wonder how things will progress w these 2 & if it can take a positive turn 4 them & their peoples. Plz update again soon! As 4 advice:a few spelling pronlems

Problems. Lol. And I hope u go n2 further detail about the seperate culture's beliefs & customs. Ie: if Ghost could b killed 4 simply having magic, do his object 2 samesex relations??? That could b a detail n the next update.
Rukia

I'm loving it already,the names are cool. Where did you come up with them? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Does Ghost know/care that his apprentice is dead? And what exactly is role(singer?) I can't picture a wild boy with teesh filed into fangs as a Gayly singing minstrel regailing others with happy tunes. And are Ghosts people only invading because they hate magic?
So many questions, please update and reveal some more details! Interesting opening, waiting to find out more to form a solid opinion, though I tentatively like the description of your characters.