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I love love love Ghost's teeth. There's such an elegant sort of wildness to it. I'm having trouble disliking Phyth. I understand he's a brute at this point and that what he's doing is for himself and not for anybody else but there's an obvious misconception between their two cultures. It makes me almost pity him that he has this blind hatred toward Ghost's people :( I also have trouble hating people for going into survival mode, which seems to be...at least in part...what he did? Or I'm totally off base. That's completely possible. Keep up the updates! I'm enjoying this so much :3

Still loving it, it's all very mysterious and really makes you want to know what magic Ghost really has, plus ravens are cool. Looking forward to reading more.

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I am so curious what secrets has Nonami. Thanks for Update and please continue this !!!

Say! That was an interesting turn with the ravens lol if I do say so myself ;-)
I wonder how long it'll take stupid dragon boy to piece together that ghost isn't quite as savage as he is desperate. And I wonder how long ghost is going to fight before he thinks to start trying to fish for key information. Ie: where are they going, what other plans does the dragon boy have for him, and why does he believe ghost has magic. He should also try to find out about the enemy nation/army, more about either how to use or better hide his own magic and possible weaknesses in dragonsagic. I hope my ideas are good, so please update soon. I'm officially a fan

O wer the ravens part of ghosts magic???
:-) cool!
As for the fangfactz,...um ok. Japanese women once blackens ther teeth after marriage, and ancient Mayans filled cavities w precious stones & gems
Poor ghost can't catch a break!!! I hope sumthin brakes the ice soon so they don't got 2 b so hostile!!!
Plz keep it up & update soon!!!
Rukia

Kk folowin wel. Wts up w name noname? No name? Nohnahmeh? Is ghost gona b permnt? Gr8 story. 10 strRz

ooohh I am loving this .another great chapter , it had me wondering if the ravens were a sign of something to come .anyways this is very good .looking forward to the next chapter .

Ah OK thanks for the answer. So I guess the dragon man is in the mindset of "all is fair in love and war, so I can rape the enemy for his power and not feel guilty"? Ouch that's as cold as I first thought ghost's reaction toward his companions death was. He doesn't seem to give a crap that ghost, for all his bravado, is a kid and wasn't even participating in the battle. And what about the question of why the southerners were invading to begin with? Also ghost gets power from death, I put that together pretty quickly. It would be very interesting if his magic took on a creature form as well(like a banshee(death singing Celtic creature), phoenix(reborn from the power of it's own death) raith(creature created from multiple dead souls) or incubus(soul eating creature). Etc. I personally favor the first three as incubus doesn't quite fit ghost's somewhat noble personality, and has been done so many times its now a boring concept. Please update soon. And don't mistake my reviews as negative, I'm merely musing and trying to be realistic. So far I find this story pretty good, keep it up.

This was so good I just had to read it again. Even better the second time around . Do you have a muse if not then how did you get inspired to write this? I hope you don't mind me asking .can't wait for the next chapter.

I really like this, its well written and seems to have a brilliant storyline, and I love the two view points you have. Can't wait to read more!