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for Ghost of the Cascade Mountains

by Delphyne

schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so gritty and rugged and angsty. Since he was introduced first, it's Noname whose side I'm on at the moment. Though one can't really choose sides in a dark grey world. If good is white, evil is black, and grey's in-between...then, this story's definitely dark grey right now. And I'm unsure as to where it's going yet. We have a 'non-native' indigenous man with a morbid gift and an more ignorant than educated soldier with a morbid beast that serves its own interests above either of theirs. Both men are as stubborn to make peace with one another as their townfolk/tribesmen are. Right now, I fret over them all.
person Jetfire
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely...my brain is a bit mushy after an operation but this made me feel better. Thank you so much.
person Mint
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! And an excellent chapter, too. I love Ghost, though pretty nuts what he did. I also like that Phyth did decide to save him. Seems like making a bond with someone is pretty tough, so hopefully he at least values Ghost based on that. Thanks for writing, and hope to see the next chapter soon!
person Ciara_D
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story, please keep updating. One of my favorite new finds in a while! Appreciate the plots holds together well and no one magically likes each other at first sight. Feel sorry for Python's little ghost about. Using his magic was probably worse for him then being used as a battery.
person Moku_Sui
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woah, now that was unexpected. Good chapter!
person Jetfire
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the way the plot is going, and I hope Pyth learns to control his temper when they are out of the strained situation, after all no one wants to date someone who will strangle you for just telling a story :D. Ghost is really starting to grow on me, he's got his own charm and brilliant way of dealing with this whole thing, at least he isn't terribly whiney and angsting all the time.

Hugs Aduial
person vidalhbeav
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see how those ravens are associated with Noname. Very intresting chapter indeed.Phyth seems to be showing just a smidge of compassion for Noname.Let's see what happens.
person Moku_Sui
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Diaval the shape shifter raven
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. The wait is killing me.
person vidalhbea
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ,it's been great! I hope the wait doesn't mean you've stopped.Hopefully not.Like I said its a great story.