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for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person Moku_Sui
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm being super greedy, but is it possible that Cyril will get pregnant again? Pretty please!!! Something about Fox's human DNA? xD
person li
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story has me running home from work to see what happens next! It is so awesome that you update so often and the stody has such a great pace that something important happens everyday. Crazy as it is I look forward to each chapter but I also worry that soon the story will end . Thanks for sharing your writing with usg
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. It's a great story and I love reading it.

xoxox
Thank you for my bedtime chapter
person Moku_Sui
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, is that a hint? God, I'm so glad you update frequently. I don't know how you do it and with such quality updates each chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Tahn
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's kind of sad that the former king went from being the savior of a little boy in a brothel, to his betrayer. What made him change like that?
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story has absolutely captivated me. I am beyond in love with the characters and could not tear it from my face until I reached the latest chapter. It is so brilliantly written and pulls so effectively on all of my heart strings. I cannot wait for the next update. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece! I look forward to more~
person Momo
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I started reading this story yesterday and stayed up ALL NIGHT reading all the chapters available!!! I love everything about it! The characters, the world building, the way it's written... I'm seriously emotionally invested in your characters. I almost died when Cyril was taken away and then I squealed with joy when he and Fox reunited!! Keep up the awesome work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Zas
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg they are finally together
person hideandgoseek
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've recently become obsessed with this story and I just want to say that your attention to detail really makes this story what it is. I was just hit with that fact in this chapter. I mean I noticed it too when they drew the happy face on the window but I also noticed it now.

You mentioned cyril's feet twice when they were on the rock and both times just hit me so hard. It just expressed them and the moment so well, like the happy face, and I honestly can't get over it. I can't belive I'm gushing about feet when this chapter as a whole was amazing too but I just needed to express my love for your attention to detail in my garbled and confusing configuration of words haha

Now I feel the need to reread the entire thing and pick out these little detail. They're honestly making me really emotional and I can't understand that lol

Can't wait for the next one!
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! This just gets better! Tryng to catch ,since I'm visting my sister,she has limited wifi so frustrating.