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for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person Momo
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really hope Cyril was right and Fox was just overwhelmed by everything that's going on right now and he didn't truly mean to sound the way he did to Cyril. Cyril is going through alot too, he should have been more compassionate :( I think you captured the brutality of war very realistically. I hope the boys get away from all that blood and death soon and go back to Emory! I wonder how he'll react to the idea of a sibling! And Raevar! How will he take the news? Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
person Tahn
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Fox is in trouble. There's gonna be words over that.
person cc1988
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ha ha! Fox brought the hammer down on Cyril and has him shuck. i really can't blame him for putting fear inside of our little Cyril for the sake of keeping he and the new little one safe. i mean Cyril can't keep putting in the hours that he's been putting in tending to his injured soldiers and expect to not have complications with his pregnancy not forgetting the added guilt and fretting he's been doing over his part in the war and all of the lost lives, he's bound to exhaust himself at any moment now. that said i think that our Fox may have a session of spanking due to him in the near future, laughs evilly* continuing to eat this fic up with a giant spoon, loves!
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just to say that I love your story :)
person Moku_Sui
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ohmygod. This chapter was sooo good!
person Mona Thompson
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I couldn't be more pleased! I am so fucking happy right now I feel like I could totally hork in my bed right now! Man you know how to set a scene and then describe it to a T so that your readers can understand it and SEE the vision you have for it. Im so excited they are having another little one! Update sooooooon please! P.S. now im also scared cause I dont want anything bad to happen to Cyril or Fox!!! I mean they are in a war zone!
person cc1988
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much it's hard for me to express it sometimes. but this is such a delicious story beautifully written with characters that are written with such amazing and deeply developed personalities that you want to explore them further and take any journey that they make with them (if that makes sense) i simply adore Cyril and Fox's relationship they get each other in ways that no other couple i've read have ever managed to do. they are truly soul mates and feel so deeply for one another that it almost makes takes my breath away. anyway just wanted to say that i'm along for the ride no matter how short or long (i would prefer the latter honestly) and great job.
person Zas
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute, "job well done my lord"
person Mona Thompson
schedule April 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy. Shit. I am so fucking pumped! I sooooo hope he is preggers! I just still love this story so much...you are amazing♥ I am also reading your underground story...and I cant wait for an update on either one! Gods I hope Cyril, Emory, Fox and baby have a happy life together but I guess I gotta wait and see! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I cant wait!
person Gslinger
schedule April 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
As always I love this story, you better not let anything bad happen to the guys... or damn-it I will put and evil spell on you! to your computer shrivels up! LOL Gslinger