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Two somebody's have their grouchy pants on. Doesn't seem like pants stay on long around those two though, so hopefully it'll be ok.

ugh! this story is perfection! perfection i tell you! i love how these boys are equally as passionate both in and out of the bedroom. they fight like nobody's business, my insides were clenched throughout their entire exchange, and i'm not ashamed to say that i may love their heated moments just as much as i love their well... "HEATED" moments. i just love how you have written a story of soul mates who love each other sometimes beyond sanity but you still manage to keep a level of realism to your story. Fox is still written as a some what spoiled and entitled king who in spite of his better judgement still displays rare moments of macho pigheadedness, as it should be, if he were to turn into a sappy prince charming type i may loose my lunch.

thanks dear

i hope everything get better for them and can not wait for next chapter

Yay!! I'm so glad they made up (sorta)! Fox and Cyril might be my favorite couple of all time. Their chemistry is electric. So relieved Fox didn't go through with his threat to Kinnon. I knew Cyril wouldn't let that happen. Looking forward to the next chapter!!

I liked this chapter, but I still think fmFox needs to know what kind of pain he causes Cyril by keeping away. That kind of stress would put the baby in danger especially when he is basically showing all the signs of the flu and he has a history of having a low immunity to Corian sickness. Not to mention apologizing for threatening him like that. Kinnon was right to flip out. I would too. Actually I'd almost like it better if Fox heard all of it from Kinnon because he would be way less forgiving than Cyril. Like, Fox didn't want to bother Cyril, but he didn't think to ask anyone how Cyril was doing in a long harsh journey while carrying a baby? How much self blame would he feel if Cyril miscarried because of him? And Cyril worked so hard to make this happen and Fox doesn't even know.

Another awesome chapter, please keep it up :)

Will always love relationship between the two men. But also too, you showed the real nastiness and evil of war in all its gross bloody un-glory with the clever great use of words and prose. It give me the true feeling I was there and could smell the blood, rot, filth, and desperate sadness of death all around them! Damn-it you're a writer, don't let anyone tell you different. And Okay I wont curse your computer, but the guys better be alive at the end of your story! Yours Truly, Gslinger

ugh! I can't get enough of this story and your characters! Strangely enough, even when Fox is threatening Cyril and Cyril is scared of him, it just seems to work. It's hard to explain, but I mean work as in, you know they still love each other like crazy. Also, I'm super glad Kinnon is alive, but so is he in love with Cyril like he wished he was his mate? Also, Cyril needs to get away from that battlefield and all that stress and trauma. I'm scared he'll have a miscarriage...But I'm glad he at least doesn't have crazy morning sickness anymore

I like this story so much . this story is great.

I like when fox is angry and possessive .

I can not understand Cyril and Kinnon both them act like children . they should understand why fox is so worried about cyril ... he lost a lot of friend in this war he is angry and afraid to lost his love and his child for second time .

i can understand why Kinnon is so bitter about fox . he is jealous , he wants cyril for himself and dose not like fox , i hope he find some one and leaves fox and cyril alone. but i can not understand cyril , he knows how much pain fox had when he found about his son or lost cyril for 6 years , fox did not have a chance with his first child to see his childhood when he was born first word and now cyril is with child again , it is risky , he is frail and they are in the middle of war , fox loves him so much and dose not want something bad happen to his love or unborn child .

cyril should understand it and dose not let kinnon say bad thing about fox .

Thank youvery much! Great chapter as aways