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for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person silvertwilight
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love it sooo much! Thank god both of them are back and with their little one again! Emory is adorable! How long were they gone for, exactly? I feel like it was a month but I'm probably wrong. I want them to have a boy too! Two little princes! One could be Infinito, and the other King, right? Or would one act as both and the younger sibling would be an heir?? Arrghh, I don't want it to end! But I guess all great things must come to an end, right? *sobs*
person angela
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"You only have boys, right? Make sure it's a boy. I don't want a sister.

oh my god it was so good , so cute . i like him so much.
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please DO write a sequel. I'll definitely be reading that if you do :)
person Momo
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
LOVED this chapter so much!!! Not just because of the sex, but you write about relationships so realistically. Egos and feelings and miscommunication...they are so very real in relationships and it's refreshing to see a couple that fights and argues and act human instead of seeing them act like perfect people who have no flaws 24/7. I really adore Cyril and Fox, tho. I can't get enough of them! <3 Thank you for writing such interesting characters!
person Tahn
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dang, Cyril's gettin' a bit further into his masochismness. After all the work that went into conceiving this little one, I hope it comes out healthy and happy. I wonder if they are gonna have marks too, I also wonder why Emory's marks are always hot. Does that get explained?
person angela
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
["But you listen to me, because I'm only going to say this once. If you ever threaten to take Emory or this little addition away from me again, the things I will do to you are fucking illegal."]

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS FOX SO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

am i evil because i like fox better when he is in control and in dom mode ?????????
person silvertwilight
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeeess!!! XD I loved this chapter!!! Cyril and fox scenes.... *fans self* too hot! Need more please!
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another wonderful chapter :)
You're churning out chapters so quickly, its amazing... I don't know how you're doing it, but whatever you're doing, please don't stop!
Ha! I'd love to see Kinnon's expression when he realises how much Cyril loves the "abuse" from Fox. I can almost picture it, Kinnon would be like "he hits you???" *horrified expression" and Cyril would go all red and go "its not like that". LOOOOL
person zas
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read this story it gets better and better I can't get enough of it.
person cc1988
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ugh! this story is perfection! perfection i tell you! i love how these boys are equally as passionate both in and out of the bathroom. they fight like nobody's business, my insides were clenched throughout their entire exchange, and i'm not ashamed to say that i may love their heated moments just as much as i love their well... "HEATED" moments. i just love how you have written a story of soul mates who love each other sometimes beyond sanity but you still manage to keep a level of realism to your story. Fox is still written as a some what spoiled and entitled king who in spite of his better judgement still displays rare moments of macho pigheadedness, as it should be, if he were to turn into a sappy prince charming type i may loose my lunch.