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for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person Lavi1443
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it
Please update soon I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, interesting and involving can't wait to read more, please write faster! G
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, let me just say: this story had me hooked from the moment I read the title! Poor Cyril, I hope the bastard gets his just deserts, & that with all his supposed insight, the prince will put together who the only 1 with motive & opportunity 2 commit the crim is!!! Plz update soon! Also, if by chance this story has a less than happy ending(tragic), could u post a warning well in advance??? I HATE sad endings, they depress me 4 days

Rukia
person abhila
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it love it!!!! More please :)
person asfdf
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
For being the 'strategist' in the duo he seems pretty dumb to not take advantage of his friend's status to have his rapist killed...but I get that it's for a plot device...so..anyway, thanks for sharing! I like that there is mystery to the pale dude's history.
schedule March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh, I'm going to love this story, I can tell. The premise is intriguing. Poor little Cyril! He went into heat and only the very bad man figured it out. I can't wait to see what will happen next! I hope Ivar doesn't get him anymore and Fox save Cyril. If you have a mailing list please add me. I am loving this story. Xoxo Robin
person Castris
schedule March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT!! I"m sooo anticipating for how you'll play this story out. I love the whole premise of the word with the different race and Gods and what not.
person BB
schedule March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I need more, give me more. :)
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is pretty cool, I'm liking it so far. Looking forward to reading more, I hope ivar gets punished for hurting poor cyril.hmmm, wonder if fox will find out.
person Semaya
schedule March 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say how much I absolutely love this story? I love the characters, world, you name it I love it. Is this weird feeling in the belly a womb forming in Cyril and if so does that mean mpreg? (Which I also love). Is there gonna be a romance between Cyril and Fox or between some random guy we haven't met yet and Cyril? Also is Cyril gonna run across more of his people (Lierians?) at some point? That'd be cool. Anyways, please don't drop this story!