AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person Gslinger
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great ending, your characters especially Cyril and Fox are definitely worth falling in love with. Look forward to more of your stories soon! G
person angela
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh thank you it was great great great.

can not wait for your new story , Atara and EMORY childhood and i really want to know which one would be like Cyril i mean can have children
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps this will be addressed in the sequel, but the priest that crippled Fox was never dealt with, or the system he was part of. Surely this wouldn't have escaped the attention of Fox (or Cyril) once he was king.
person Jess
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for that story! I loved it!!! I am so glad you finished it :) I can't wait for the sequel and the other stories you have up to continue! Great story!
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy it ended the way it did and sad that its ended XD
person Mona Thompson
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. BRAVO!!! That was absolutely perfect. You couldnt have done it better. I am going to miss them...but I cant wait for Atara's story to unfold! You are so amazing and thank you for sharing your talent with all of us♥♥♥
person Moku_Sui
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gah! This is so good! I'm sad it's coming to an end, but it definitely feels like the time is right. I hope they have a girl haha
person Tahn
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I hope it's a little girl. I can see her being Daddy's little girl and being spoiled rotten, but I also see her being able to take care of herself, and not take crap from anyone.
person Momo
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!! YES!! They're home!! Their reunion with Emory was the sweetest! I feel like I can breathe easy now that they're safe and away from any battlefields. I'm sad the story is nearing it's end :'( I do hope you'll consider a sequel! I hope they have another boy! Emory needs a little brother just like Fox!
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
aww i wish the story could go on forever! whatever you choose (sequels or not) i want to let u know how much i enjoyed this story. it is truly a gem that i'm happy i found on AFF. long live cyril and fox's love!!!!