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for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person Poohkie87
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating. I look forward to seeing how this turns out. especially what prophesies surround Cyril and Fox.
person Alexandria
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story and how fast you're updating! Fox and Cyril are so cute and I can't wait for their kiss.
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OK. I almost cried when I began this chapter, from how upset I was. By the end I was crying tears of joy!!! Finally fox & Cyril r taking steps 2 become a couple! AND the rapist is about 2 get what's coming 2 him!!! Hey, just an idea: maybe the whipping can start a religious upheaval that changes the obviously 2 harsh order n the story??? It just seems realistic that if the system pi$$es off the entire kingdom they'd find it a good idea 2 make sum new rules & change sum old ones... Plz update soon!!! Love yet work!!!
Rukia
person Asdf
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like how the story is progressing. Now that the Ivan? guy is less of a secrecy issue for Cy, they can focus on more important things :) it sounds like there's a huge religious plot/subplot going on and I can't wait to see what it is! Thanks for the updates!
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I found this story yesterday and I am completely and utterly hooked. I really hope you update every single day, but I also realize that you might have a life... you don't do you? Please tell me you don't and that your muse will make you finish this story soon!! :)
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw lol ya bad weather n my part of east Texas 2. But awesome 2 get such frequent updates. I'm loving the warm&fuzzy moments peppered w the bratty Fox's sarcasm, lol. O no Ivar isn't dead/n agony yet!!! Guess that's 1 way of injecting the drama, lol!!! BTW I meant 2 say yer work, not yet work, last review. Srry!!! Plz update soon:-)
Rukia
PS: about the idea, its just that. This is still yer story & plot & I don't want u 2 think I would want 2 influence it 4 my own enjoyment n any way. I hate ppl who talk like they can order the awthor around...
person May
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love, love this story! And I love how frequent the updates are~

Thank you for posting this story, I'm looking forward to future chapters :)
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
THANKS 83!!! This new twist caught me completely by surprise!!! Poor fox!!! How will he protect Cyril if he's recovering from 50 lashes!?! I hope something dissolves the tension b4 it explodes... And hopefully the leirions will come out of this with far better treatment. Plz update soon!
Rukia
person BB
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You can't just stop a chapter like that! Are you insane! I need to know who gets whipped, is it Fox or is it Cyril or is it both of them? Update soon, I need to know.
person Keakealani
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is so great and very original! I can't wait to find out what happens next, keep up the good work :)