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for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person asfdf
schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear about your car....but thank you car, for chaining this awesome author to her home so she can write more chapters...heh heh heh....
person li
schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story so much! When I read the first chapter I thought Cyrill was going to be Harlan's slave. It was such a nice surprise to see that the king was truly caring and generous. This story has romance, humor and a mystery or two. I am very interested to know about Cyril's people and what is the meaning of the word they cried when found (cought?). OH! Lets not forget that rat Ivan. Where did he go and how did he disappeared just in time?

Your story is wonderful and you post often, thank you for sharing your story with us
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw. Love the warm & fuzzy chap! I told wen Cylis said the only thing fox owed him 4 was making them miss court. Grrr. I hope ivar trips up soon & gets caught!!! It would b therapeutic 4 Fox 2 c him punisht, tho probably traumatizing 4 Cyril. Great work!!! Plz update soon!!!
Rukia
PS: question: is this possibly gonna b an mpreg??? It just seems mor likely as a man is having heats, rather than an inhuman hormone serge like I first theorized. If so I think it needs 2 b taggd. I<3mpreg!!!
person BB
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay for bad weather!
person Candigirl
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My new addiction! Loving this so far! Keep writing! I can't wait for more PrincexSecond romance! Make me wonder if the king and his second has something going on considering the queen is crazy! Haha
person Gslinger
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hope the kisses and contact cure the prince of his wounds and they become even closer. And please I want more story as soon as possible! G
person asdf
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Shout out of thanks to the shitty weather that is keeping you inside to write more chapters for my greedy brain!! Love the latest update!

Hope Ivar gets what's coming to him! Wonder why it's so hard finding him? They should've jumped him at the next tutoring session!
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh cool, we may get 2 meet other unenslaved leirians soon:-). I hope they catch Ivar soon, or that at least he won't cause a terrible amount of trouble 4 our couple. And thanx 4 the reply again!!! And on a smaller note I hope we can get n2 the personalities of the younger princes soon, & maybe explain the mother's self medicating motivation n mor detail...
Plz update soon!
Rukia
person May
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for yet another lovely chapter, I'm always thrilled to see a new one waiting for me!
person Candigirl
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so hot! I know there was no mpreg tag on the story but I'm really hoping that is where you are going with this! I mean he already produces the wetness normally produced by a woman that the sperm needs to survive on the way to the eggs! Can't wait for more man sex! Keep it up!