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Yes! They caught him! Can't wait for his execution!

O thank freaking goodness!!! Ivar's finally about 2 pay!!!!! I hope he doesn't spit 2 much poison b4 he stops breathin. Btw bin thinking: ther has 2 b a 'trick' 2 get a leirian man pregnant, in order 4 it not 2 already b known by humans, like a potion, herb, spell, or exposure 2 a specific item. Tho the cliche 'love makes the baby' is a possibility- tho that would b the cheesiest way. Also, in order 4 Cyril & Fox's sex lives 2 b truly happy, they're gonna hav 2 find a way 2 help Cyril tolerate pain. Perhaps leirians hav something that helps them block or numb pain like they hav somethin 2 help concieve as men.
Plz update soon & I hope my ideas r useful 2 u :-)
Rukia

Wow, now I *really* can't wait for the next chapter! My love and thanks for this awesome story, as always!

Oo drama bomb... Well somethin had 2 happen 2 pull Fox's giant ego down a cupl pegs. Its never good 4 royalty 2 get 2 hi & mighty, tho it was a litl anticlic Bentlyins reaction. I'm up 4 readin Fox's POV, it would help w depending his character, & might benefit the progress of the plot.
Questions: could u go n2 more detail n the religious beliefs, like the tolerance of gay love, or the leirian gods??? It just seems 2 vague 4 it 2 hav bin strict enuf that a CROWN PRINCE could b almost whipped 2 death(50 lashes can b fatal). Also, if Cyril is a 'heathen', does that make him exempt from religious laws???:-) food 4 thot!!! Plz update soon
Rukia

wow.... that was really intense T.T

I would love to get a chapter or part of a chapter from Fox's POV, especially after that last chapter. That whole chapter broke my heart and I can't wait for the most amazing make up sex to happen between them. Is Ivar going to be popping out at some point in the future and try to hurt Cyril again? :( is there a bit of a d/s element to Fox and Cyril's relationship because I'm kinda getting that vibe from the way Fox can be controlling and dominant towards Cyril during their intimate moments.

Oooh,what a hot chapter.I can tell how much Fox cares for Cyril.May they find Ivar and punish him accordinly, and I'm all for cheering Fox on ! ;)

I love this story so so much! the way they handle each other is so fantastic! Can't wait for more!!!!

Damn. Fox had to open his mouth. Wonder if they'll apolgize to each other. Really , Fox was being an ass. He kinda deserved that. Damn.

I just knew Fox and Cyril would end up together! Just loving this story, so cool. Also totally hot scene between the two , wow ! Hopefully the next chapter will be good just like the last ones were .