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for A Land of Gods and Kings

by Alasdair-you

person anon
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like the suspense built throughout the story, definitely a contributor to the "I want to know everything NOW" feeling I am now left with :3
This review is mainly to (hopefully) motivate you to write. Onward, author-sama, onward!
person vidalhbea
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow those two can go at it like rabbits ! That was such a hot scene . Finally ivar is caught! Slice off his balls I say! Sorry too much? :/
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oooh cool!!! New twist new twist!!! Plz update soon & tell us more bout 'Infinito'
8-) and if possible, plz don't neglect detail of ivals punishment
Rukia
person May
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Once again, thank you for this new chapter! You're really spoiling us with your frequent updates, but far be it from me to complain about it :) I'll just be happy and grateful for as long as it continues :)
person Anonymous
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I get that you're into the whole BDSM thing, but why the unnecessary roughness and pain? What purpose does that really serve? There's already so much pain inherent in the story.
person Semaya
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Cyril is a Lierian god that's gonna wind up uniting all the Lierian tribes and getting them to form some kind of alliance with the Corians and they're gonna crush Glacia and Imara like you suggested in a previous chapter! That's my prediction and I'm sticking with it.
Poor Fox :( he's probably sure that Cyril won't be able to pass up the opportunity to meet his people and will wind up leaving Fox. And that better not happen or I'm gonna be super upset
I noticed the new mpreg tag so I'm curious to see if all male Liearians can get pregnant or just Cyril
If Cyril is 18 then how old was he when Harlan first found him? I could go back and look in the story but that's just so much work.
Great chapter as usual :)
person vidalhbea
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh the plot thickens ! What will cyril do? Hmmmm.
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was the hottest make up sex ever! I'm glad Fox came to his senses, and it was all thanks to Brentlyn ya! Way to be good bro.Hmm, a Fox pov , intresting very intresting indeed.
person Gslinger
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Don't agree that it is unhealthy relationship, maybe not down-to-earth practical yet, only time can deliver that! The boys most definite need and love each other strongly. If only all loving relationships should be as close and committed. Hopefully you will not end the story here! Gslinger
person Semaya
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Expectations met and passed!! Yeah their relationship is definitely unhealthy but I kinda love it :) Whenever I see this story has been updated I get super excited and have to stop what I'm doing to read it (just like right now haha). This story is feeding my procrastination beautifully!