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That ended...tragically. So no development in the middle, just a timeskip? I can only assume the inevitable happens. Although, I hope what Kinnon said isn't as bad as it seems. It's bad enough Ivar took advantage of Cyril and I guess Cyrill will eventually have to go through the tribal sex rite. Unless Cyril can muster up the courage to defy his physiology and the tradition and the religion he never grew up with... I don't see that happening because both Cyril and Fox are broken (and will remain broken...maybe Fox will recover, I don't know). At this point, I just feel like Cyril is a sacrificial lamb and Fox is a third wheel. A lost love story for these two. Maybe there's hope for their children? Sorry for the theories and assumptions.

Oh my god! No!! You can't end it there! My heart is torn to pieces! Cyril will be raped by a bunch of men and Fox is going to become some sort of cold stoned killer of a king! And Harlan or whatever the fuck his name is and Ambrose! I want to kick their fucking asses for doing such a thing! Can't Cryill find out he is pregnant with Fox's child and the god and the king can join forces and rule over both nation? Or fox can run from home to assist Cryill like a second and Brent can take over the kingdom?! This is some sick shit! Lol I can't even read Fox's pov knowing it will end like this! Unless it doesn't, please tell me it doesn't!!!!

I really hope that you continue writing from Cyril's POV... to stop here and switch over to Fox's would be rather jarring and has this unfinished feel to it. Whether you continue in this part or make a new post for part 2, I think to continue this one might be smarter as in new readers can tell that you're dedicated to the story by the number of chapters and that will look attractive to them. I know that I sometimes skip a new story unless I can see that the author won't quit after 2-3 chapters (which happens far too often for my peace of mind). On the other hand, to have a *completed* stamp on a former story is also really attractive to readers... so I'm afraid there's not much help in me.

Anyway, that was a cruel cliffhanger. The only reason I'm calm(ish) is because I know there's never long between your updates. And again about the POV, I know you said you were going to switch over to Fox's but how about maybe switching between the two of them? You know, Cyril-Fox-Cyril-Fox etc. etc. I would just miss Cyril's head like hell and I'm not sure Fox is quite up to filling his shoes at this point in the story, at least not entirely on his own. I just really don't want to say goodbye to Cyril's POV. At least not entirely.

I really would prefer part two to be continued in the same story, not a new one. Really engaged with this tale and so tearful after that last chapter!

It would definitely be easier to follow the other half (?) If you keep it under the one title. Very excited!

You really need convincing to continue this great story!!? I've been on this site for years, and this past year I've been having a hard time finding anything good to read. I felt like all of the great writers were gone, and all that was left was a bunch of plot less kink garbage. I kept checking back to find something to read though, and saw your story. You don't know how great it is to read your story, and with the added bonus of an update, sometimes 2, everyday? You're a freaking miracle! Anyway, I just went back and re-read what you wrote at the bottom of the story, and realize that you just needed convincing for continuing Cyril's half in this story. I guess the only thing I can say is that the story doesn't feel complete with this as the ending, and I really want to know what the Lierians are like from Cyril's POV. Thanks for the update!

I started crying when I realized what was going to happen. So sad. If a sequel is up I'll definitely read it. I need to know what happens.

omg!!! Need to know what happened!!!

What!?! Cyril's not in some kind of palace doing King planning stuff?

KYAAA!!!!! Yay!!! 2 chaps 4 the price of 1!!! I love it!!! Dang that was a bigger time skip than I expected 2. Plz update soon as I always request. I recall reading that kinnon mentioned up to 3 infinitos existing at a time, & was curious about that. Also, if an infinito wer 2 hav multiples(twins/triplets), rationally wouldn't he hav followed the rule of only 1 birth, and also passed on his abilities mor than once??? Food for thot. Didn't an earlier chapter say an infinito was captured in ther history, going n2 heat & leirians tryin & failing 2 rescue him??? Unless he had pointless heats after birth, or managed an unmentioned escape, how could the infinito ability hav bin past on????? My head is spinning. Plz help!
Rukia