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I feel as elated as if I had my fix and now I'm happy. Cyril is back! Tomorrow I'll take time to write all of my thoughts on these last three chapters. I am so glad for your frequent updates :))

Omg omg don't know what to say!!!

Noes! What's gonna happen? I've gotta know! Will he ever see Fox and his family again? What do his people need with him? Can he be like a link between the two peoples so he doesn't have to lose his Fox? You're killing me man.

Wow,what an emotional chapter. Completely heart-wrenching. Poor Fox ,but mostly poor Cyril. Why is Harlan being an ASS? He shouldve been supportive to Fox . I understand why he did it, but it sucks . And as for how the rest of your story should go , like I said no matter what you dedcide I'm sure it'll be great! I think your avid readers will agree.

OMG....... You have to continue this. There are too many unanswered questions.

I would say continue it in this story

Nothing has to be forever, maybe Cyril can fulfil his destiny and still find his a way back to his lover the prince. Also maybe Fox the prince not having such an overwhelming great dependence on Cyril will be able to develop his own maturity, emotional strength, and fortitude that he so presently lacks now. "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"

Also Who say Rite of pregnancy has to be a rape orgy, if the males worship Cyril as their god....why would they cruelly rape their own god?

Both characters in your story as people must advance by this point they can't remain as they are and remain total sane. They need maturity and transformation to advance forward. Also it's said ".... in absence the heart goes fonder!"

Why don't you just continue the story in A Land of God and King, Part 2, with Fox being the narrator. Don't start a second story. Your the author, so you're the boss! Only you can decide whether it's worth going forward with the story! A Fan Gslinger

Blech!!! I felt like my insides were tearin up reading the last part!!! Poor Cyril, some1 help!!! Poor poor fox!!! When will these 2 get their happily ever after!?!?!
Say, if this so happens 2 not end well, you'll tell me ahead of time plz!?!?? I can't stand tragedies, if I read or watch 1 I get depressed for WEEKS. So plz???
Plz continue, & hopefully things will get better when fox steps up 2 bat
Rukia
PS: woops I missed that part of the explanation thank u, the hole thing was so awkward I just skimmed it.

This chapter was really emotional. It ended on such a sad note, that I hope to read sono the 'sequel'. In my opinion, you should continue with this story inside the same file with the same POV (!!). After all this time whenever a begin to read a new chapter this feeling of merging inside the character's head comes too natural. I would miss Cyril greatly if you changed something. Also, usually when sequels are involved, a pause from writing is what happens. Hope to read soon the update; your story is addicting ;)

I really really like this story, you write your characters very well and you've created a very gripping storyline, I'm very intrigued as to what happens to Cyril next and to Fox and the others, cant wait for the next chapter ^_^