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Well you caught me totally unaware with that one, I didn't expect to see him back in the story so soon! And it made me gasp! Good ploy to keep your readers off guard! You, definitely, should consider publishing this story for it is most mature, a excellent read, and inspiring. Certainly better than the majority of stories on AFF at this particular time, most of the dribble isn't worth the time to read it! Waiting for more, for you always deliver! AS ALWAYS YOU FAN. Gslinger













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WOW! So this is what happens when I step away from aff.org for a couple of days...4 chapters...that last one though (chapter 20) was a doozy. I got chills when Fox got chills and goose-freaking-bumps raised when he recognized 'Leland' as Cyril. I have no words to truly describe my feelings...I had butterflies in my stomach while continuing to read all the way to the end and now I'm ready to jump my cubicle walls...

Where has Cyril been? Is Leland his 'real' name? Did he ever make it back to his tribe and his ritual orgy? Where's Kinnon (although I kinda wanna skin that lil f*****)? If Cyril did make it back and there was a tribal orgy where's his progeny? So many questions and one thought standing forefront...When am I going to get more?

Guess what...the chills and confusion you raised in me over this one chapter are deserving of your very own meme --> https://imgflip.com/i/jci9n

p.s. I got your book recs and they both look familiar but I'll look through them! Thanks again!

Oh my God! Stop being such a great writer! Just kidding, but honestly this is great! So izzy and Brentlyn? Somehow I knew that was gonna happen,they make a cute couple.Oohh Natalya?Hmmm,she seems nice and all ,but I still prefer Fox and Cyril.so many things happening I can't keep up,but I love!

Two for the price of one! Loving it! This chapter was great,of course.The ending I didn't see coming was a shock.So what happen? I thought dumbass- I mean Harlan had sent Cyril off to live with his people?Unless dumbass-sorry Harlan lied. Can't wait for next chappie. Yeah,in case your were wondering I'm not a fan of Harlan.I know I know he did because he thought he was doing the right thing,sucks.He couldve went about it a diffrent way.

I thought Cyril had white hair?

Oh Fox is going to go berserk on Harlan and Ambrose...

YES!!!!! I was praying for this, and I'm so glad it happened!!!! IT did happen! haha But doesn't this complicate things with Fox's wife? What happens with her then?

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
very good

Oh my God!! This chapter rocks!I wasn't expecting for Cyril to have changed.I feel bad about him having to whore himself,but he has a good reason.I knew Emory was Fox's son the second he was described.Fox shouldnt be mad though ,now he has an heir and a reason to unite the corians and lierians.Kiss Natalya goodbye. It won't be that simple yeah,but it could work. I'm rooting for them. As always this is stellar work! Love reading this.

ITS GETTING SOOOOOO GOOD!