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Wow. I was sick for a few days and came back to not one, not two, but MANY updates and my name acknowledged
Icel is a happy camper
AND MPREG! SWEET MOTHER OF HEAVEN THE MPREG!!!!!
I kind of feel sorry for Harlan though. For the first few chapters he was a good guy, and then suddenly he's not a good guy to cheer for anymore. Is this a plot twist? Will he be a good guy again? I want to see how he would react to Emory.
And also uncle moments with Brentlyn.

Oh man...that last line. Hot! But this chapter was intense...I wonder how Nat's going to take it all...

Okay! Happy again! I thought you were retelling the story in fox pov not continuing! *sighs of relief*. I love Fox Jr by the way! I sooooo knew it! An he is so Fox! Haha I love it! And now back to fox x cryl!

Awww, so sweet!!! Wow the leirian relationship w their infinito is solo complicated. If leirians were put into higher positions n the corian empire, the blending of the 2 cultures should b far smoother w Emory as the bridge between worlds. They are already regarded 4 their gear, poisons, herbs & fighting styles. It wouldn't b an unimaginable stretch 2 give them key roles for integration. And hey!!! I saw u used my word patricidal;-) lol. Honestly I hope u take time 2 insert a scene where Harlan gets put in his place 4 his gross misconduct. It honestly couldn't hav bin hard 2 guess at a possibility of Cyril bein pregnant(it only takes once!!!). As well as Androse. They both owe the couple so much for the grief they caused. I can't believe he had the nerve 2 even attempt the marriage for fox. And 1 good thing I would say about Emory, physically, he should b far mor adaptable than most leirians or corians, like a hybrid with the best of both parents. I hope the poor baby didn't get Fox's temper tho:-(
Plz update soon
Rukia
PS: I'm not going 2 hav internet access after 2moro, so I hope ur not offended & think I stopt reading intentionally!!! Shipping out 2 fort Jackson for bootcamp
:'-(

The little one is so cute. I hope that he is accepted.

Squee! Baby! An heir to both kingdoms, how's that gonna be handled?

Well I bet Fox is feelin pretty patricidal at the moment!!! If Cyril/infinito/Leland(poor guy needs a concrete label!) Had STAYED, & married fox, the boy would b the legitimate coriany heir!!! O man I hope that since fox has no other kids that this goes well, as it can only strengthen an alliance!!! Thank you SO much uve gotn me SO excited 4 next chapter!!! Hey wait- fox ain't gonna bad at LELAND rite!?! That would b so unfair after all this... Plz update soon!!!
Rukia
Ps: this is honestly 1 of the most GRIPPING stories I've read on this site in ages. It is definitely worthy of publication and I hope someday you can evenake a profit from it! Please NEVER stop writing and imagining :-)

Aaaaw!!! The mood of this chap was so intense!!! I hope that the leirians that had stayed were just captured, not killed, & that they'll b freed w the end of the war. And I am completely honest in all my review opinions, so now I hope I get to read much more of your work in the future! I mostly read slash, but I think I'd read almost anything if I saw ur name as the writer :-) (anything but femslash!!!)
Also, I hope that the corians r mor accepting of Emory than fox first thing. After all, his only leirian features r his Marx, & that he's a lil short. And after being forcably estranged from his own father, run out of his land, & watching his home burn knowin hundreds of ppl wer ther, I'd not begrudge him his birthright (come on he's Fox's 1st born by 6 years!!!). Leirians from what I gather make amazing stealth/gorilla fighters: a hugely effective factor(wow look at my vocabulary) n ANY army during any time. Perhaps if they prove 2 b key 2 winning the war, the ppl could b made the feel obligated 2 accept him as their heir... But that's just ONE possibility;-)
As always, plz update soon
Rukia

Omg, Emory is adorable!

I cannot wait for the next chapter and to hear what might make fox angry!