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for Abana and Marrok

by Roronoa_93

person A
schedule March 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think it should be "tome" as in book, not "tomb" as in the place where dead bodies are.
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start. I like the attention to detail.
Just one thing: was the spelling of "Tomb" intentional? "Tome" refers to books, "Tomb" to graves, so it made me curious.
person Tahn
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, neat. Sorcerer. This should be good.

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