schedule
May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Boring...I can't even read it. There's too much detail being thrown at once. There's no flow to it at all
schedule
February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You dont have to have him calling his pet some new name in every sentence. Its not that I'm saying "why is he being so mean" either, it just sounds silly.