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July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story!!! It's a lot slower paced than your other storys but that has its merrit for this story!!!! I really liked the ending how everybody gets their happy end!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!!!!
P.S I will skip Synergy since you don't plan to continue it (thanks for the heads up^^) cause I really don't like storys which aren't finished^^
See You again in Sacrifices!!!
P.S I will skip Synergy since you don't plan to continue it (thanks for the heads up^^) cause I really don't like storys which aren't finished^^
See You again in Sacrifices!!!
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May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I realize this is finished but I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed the whole story and I thought the placing and all the details were astounding! Thank YOU for sharing I hope to read more from you soon!
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May 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww! What a perfect ending to a perfect story♥
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May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ah mah gah! This story was so good! I love happy endings!!!! But I felt like Rigel didn't really react much to Cress's rape...I guess I was just expecting a stronger reaction. Anyways, I hope you write more! Love your writing style!
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May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! So glad I saw this, wonderful world-building, plot & romance. Can't wait for the 18th
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May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
damb...I was worried that would happen
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May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG You're joking! 2 weeks hiatus after that chapter??? T__T
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May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've picked up this story in the last few weeks and can't wait until mondays now! Love the twins. I had a feeling that Cress would get caught and they'd think he was Perl. the two week wait might kill me! Great story!
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May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I decided to read this, from the description I never would have thought that Cress was a hardworker looking for respect in the military, I was thinking he would be a pampered arrogant asshole. I thought Perl would actually be a little more tough, because I thought it would be his choice to be a whore and he'd be much more of an active survivalist (I don't even think I had read all the story tags at first, I generally don't care about them and didn't know it was a slave fic at first.) So when I started reading it I was very pleasantly surprised.
I like the pacing, though I'm a little disappointed I didn't get to see the argument between Cress and Rigel about Grutan, there's so little direct interaction with them that I would have loved to see more of the tension, and anger, because I'm sure in that situation Cress would have remembered a little bit more why he didn't want to be with Rigel to begin with. If, though it seems more like when, they do get back together there are still going to be the same issues, because it doesn't seem like Cress ever told Rigel why he left, so Rigel doesn't even know what the problem is.
More scenes with the father would be nice, I want to know if he still thinks he can use Perl to his advantage, and what Perl really thinks of him, or if Perl is letting Cress influence his perception.
And maybe I'm just a horrible person who likes conflict, but it feels like Perl, since being saved from Grutan, has had it really easy. I mean, is no one honestly going to dig into his past and find out, if not about Grutan, at least that there is a lie? Or is he going to have someone come on to him way to strong and make him freak out?
This ended up way longer than I meant, but just to much to say since I started reading this so late into the story. Good luck writing, looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what happens on Grutan. Almost wondering if Cress will be mistaken for Perl, I feel like the odds of that happening are too much, but I'll just have to wait and see.
I like the pacing, though I'm a little disappointed I didn't get to see the argument between Cress and Rigel about Grutan, there's so little direct interaction with them that I would have loved to see more of the tension, and anger, because I'm sure in that situation Cress would have remembered a little bit more why he didn't want to be with Rigel to begin with. If, though it seems more like when, they do get back together there are still going to be the same issues, because it doesn't seem like Cress ever told Rigel why he left, so Rigel doesn't even know what the problem is.
More scenes with the father would be nice, I want to know if he still thinks he can use Perl to his advantage, and what Perl really thinks of him, or if Perl is letting Cress influence his perception.
And maybe I'm just a horrible person who likes conflict, but it feels like Perl, since being saved from Grutan, has had it really easy. I mean, is no one honestly going to dig into his past and find out, if not about Grutan, at least that there is a lie? Or is he going to have someone come on to him way to strong and make him freak out?
This ended up way longer than I meant, but just to much to say since I started reading this so late into the story. Good luck writing, looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what happens on Grutan. Almost wondering if Cress will be mistaken for Perl, I feel like the odds of that happening are too much, but I'll just have to wait and see.
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April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter!
I love the boys and how thinks sort out but i`m sad for Ahnna. Hope she will find her happy ending, too.
and as always: Can`t wait for more :)
I love the boys and how thinks sort out but i`m sad for Ahnna. Hope she will find her happy ending, too.
and as always: Can`t wait for more :)