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March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story got me hooked right away. I must have a dark side where the mind of a serial killer intrigues me. Michael is so scary and interesting. I'd be going back, too. I can't decided if I like Gabriel yet but he has the potential to be good for Xavier. The first three chapter are great. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing your story
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March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... have a really bad feeling for Xavier; wonder if this Gabriel is related to Michael. Twin or accomplice? Or maybe the (escaped?) convict himself. Or who knows, maybe he is the real murderer and the one in jail is just a scapegoat :P So much suspense. Update soon pleaseeee!!!
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March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Two chapters! Can't tell you how giddy I become when I round out! Haha :) Here is my review for chapter 2: poor dog :( that scene made me dread what I thought was coming. And oh no! He's falling for Michael's trap ><
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March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: aww :) I like that Xavier has found someone like Raphael, it's a huge coincidence though that they share ironical names like that and that Raphael looks like Michel; maybe they are related somehow? Xavier's sanity seems to already has taken a toll; wonder how this new development will work for him, looking forward to reading more! And thanks for the quick updates! :D
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March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The New Guy is really nice, if Xavier knows how is Good for him, he will be better forget about Michael. Are they maybe relatives ?
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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay! So glad you decided to keep going. I look forward to reading about your characters.
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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good! I liked it, and will keep an eye out for updates.
I have to point this out, though. In the first chapter, you make a Silence of the Lambs reference, and use the name Christine. The character's name was actually Clarice.
I have to point this out, though. In the first chapter, you make a Silence of the Lambs reference, and use the name Christine. The character's name was actually Clarice.
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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A born killer, I believe it will be a hard time to Xavier, falls he falls in love.
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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really like it, can't wait to read more😄 thanx for sharing, Jen
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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story so far! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and I hope Gabriel is the one he ends up with in the end!!! I am in love with Gabriel!! <3