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for Saving Ezra

by ramblingrobin

person Psy-girl
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, poor kid. I wish to know more about him and his home. I hope he and Joshua can have a happy ending together forever.
person Olaf
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I guess Ezra's dad might not be as cool as I first thought and just hope he really loves his son and will be supportive. Geeze, Ezra is so messed up but who could blame him. I hope Joshua picks up more signs that Ezra is being bullied/abused and sexually assaulted before it's too late and stops it. Whoever this Kent is, I hope he isn't related to that little shit Brody.

person longduckdong
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is so good and well writen I cant wait to see what happens to ezra next
person smint45
schedule March 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
amazing chapter^^ Poor Ezra has probably a very religious father or somebody who alway tells him beeing homosexual is wrong.... poor guy probably thinks he is sick for liking men that really must be terrible.... Hope Joshua can show him otherwise. See you again soon!!!
person smint45
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far^^Hope to read more of this soon!!!
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories so I was so happy to see a new one. This one seems a little different from the others (a caring father! teachers that actually notice an abused student and try to help!) but it makes me nervous because I have a feeling whatever you have up your sleeve will be terribly horrific for poor Ezra. I can't wait to find out what it is but I hope he'll get a happy ending...eventually.
person Olaf
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I seriously want to do some bodily harm to Brody and his chump buddies for tormenting poor Ezra and hope they get thrown out of school for what they are doing. Did Ms. Garcia warn the school staff including lunch monitors to keep an eye on Ezra? I hope the monitor noticed what was going on and reports it to the principal and Ms. Garcia. I hope she introduces her sensible pump to Brody and his gang very soon! I can't wait for Ezra and Joshua to work together and that Joshua stops what is happening to Ezra before it's too late.

I hope Ezra isn't raped by the Football team that would be horrible and the poor kid is suffering enough as it is.

I haven't read your other stories and will hold off for now until I finish reading this one to see where you go with it.
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you've got me hooked on another story, Robin! lol

I love the way you write; I just get sucked in to the characters and the story and everything else disappears. :)

On to chapter two.

Oh hey, are you going to write more on that other story. I can't think of the name of it, but I mentioned it in the non-review I left the other day for this story. lol I'll have to stalk your profle. ;)
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this poor kid. He can't catch a break, can he? Were those the assholes who keep bullying him after school?

Well at least he won't have to worry about those d-bags when he's working with Joshua. :)

Great story, Robin! I just want to wrap Ezra up in a hug. :)
person Olaf
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Ezra! Who the heck is bullying him? So, his mom died and he lives with his dad who seems to care deeply for him and is concerned about what's happening with his son. I hate stories that the parents have no concern for their child in situations like this. He's so cute and I want to make friends with him but more importantly protect him from his tormentors. I hope Joshua will be Ezra's savior and that this story has a happy ending.