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for Saving Ezra

by ramblingrobin

person Zlott
schedule February 4, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Why was this never finished

person Anonymous
schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for updating! I'm hoping Ezra is finally free and that he will never have to see his father or bastard Luke again. The rape chapter was brutal and horrific but I feel it was necessary for the story. Now, hopefully it's all sunshine and rainbows for Ezra and Josh! Please update again soon! :) 

schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

As usual, you know my opinions about this chap. Freaking awesome, fast paced, and leaves you eager for more. I hope Ezra doesn't freak out too badly when giving his report.

person Lunar
schedule November 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Can we stop it with the abuse stuff now and move on to the healing part? I really don't need a graphic description of rape.and am honestl not even reading the chapters in which stuff like that happens, which is a shame because it is a good story. I just feel like the whole abuse part is dragging on too long

person Anonymous
schedule November 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh god, this is so sick but so goood at the same time ;D

Your writing is really good and I like how you portray all the charakters. Also the developement of the story and the rising amount of information and knowledge about Ezras life (and espescially his suffering) is one of the reasons why I couldn't stop reading until I reached the last chapter that has come out so far. 

I can't wait to see how all of this will continue, how long Ezra has to live like this and if he has a chance to ever heal from this nightmare he had to live through his whole life. 

And Luke is just one of those Charakters you wish a very horrible death ^^" but maybe it would already suffice if his actions are being made public, I don't know. He just can't get away with this - is what I hope. And Ezras father.. well, he's a little different as he doesn't seem to get sexual relief out of how he is treating his own son. His psychic problems are so bad that maybe he can't really be held fully responsible for what he had done. I guess he should be put into a closed institution. 

Haha, well that are just some of the thoughts running through my head after reading til chapter 10. Please continue with this story. 

person @Хайр
schedule October 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is such an amazing story. I feel so many emotions when reading this. I really hope that Ezra can be saved soon. I really feel for him. If I were in this story, I would try to be there for him so much. You are doing a great job. Thanks! and please continue updating. I want to see Ezra happy and together with Josh. <3 

 

person Anonymous
schedule October 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh God poor Ezra

person Toogie Bandana
schedule October 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

...woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow just wow. This plot. the hardsheip. & the whole story is like....are you sure this is fiction? bc the way you're writing this story is begging to differ. like damn...damn...Must see what happens next. 0_0!!!!!!!!!!

schedule October 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm pretty sure I babbled enough about how freaking awesome Josh's mom is. And you know that I absolutely dread, but simply HAVE to read what happens next to the poor boy. I dread it so much. But, I'm also eager to find out how far Josh's mom will go to protect Ezra.

person Lunar
schedule October 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So I'm hoping that this will soon be the end of the abusing part, what with a sensible adult finally noticing what is happening, and moving on to the healing part. The healing part is always the most interesting thing imo, so I'm looking forward to what you're going to do with that