rate_review Reviews

I have to say this was awesome. I can't wait for the next installment. I was also wondering if this story is only written from one person's point of view... I kind of wonder what Rhao's perspective is. Update soon please.

I'm loving this story already, and it's just started.

I am realy curious how it goes on... I liked this chapter very much. Thanks and please update soon.

Looking forward to more^^

I like it!

Ok... So I've taken the bait. Great cliffe on the first chapter. So I know the girlfriend will be the easiest to ditch and the slowly losing battle for dominance will be fun to read about but I wonder what the many issue of the story will be. Update soon.... like very soon please.

I liked it very much. please update soon, I can not wait to see how this go on....

Ah, a wild plot appears!

Sounds nice so far, thanks for posting.

I enjoyed the beginning to this story and look forward to seeing where you take it as you post more chapters.

One criticism... you may want to look at the spacing between paragraphs in the second chapter. The spacing seems doubled or tripled and it made it harder to read the story. The first chapter did not have the same issue and I know that authors sometimes complain that their formatting gets messed up during the uploading/posting process. On a positive note, at least your paragraphs did not lose the word-wrap... that truly messes with reading flow.

:) looking forward to the next chapter :) :)

Very cool, can't wait for more.