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Oooo. Dramaaa. interesting twist. Can't wait to see how this gets fixed

Yay! They are finally mated! Woo!

Godamn it, I read that chapter entirely too fast. Now I'm going to have to claw at my desk until the next chapter's done.

I don't know why, but I really, really liked that in this world "humanity" in all its colors is just considered one race. If the real world would stop categorizing everyone and just get to remembering that we are all human despite what our cultures and backgrounds are, then it'd be a bit of a better place. It's a shame that it could only take something drastic (extra-terrestrials, a supernatural invasion, other such chaos) before we all got our own heads out of our asses enough to leave it at just the 'human' race.

Crap...now I lost my place again. Where was I? Right, Brandon was saying about how Rhao knew 12 human languages etc.

HA! If Brandon had this hard a time with having to consummate their bond, I wonder how the heck Eoin's gonna talk Freddie into it. Snacks? Romantic outing? I doubt he's the conniving sort to tell him that if they bonded, he'd get to see Brandon all the time.

And I had a feeling that the voice inside Brandon's head had something to do with his shadow lineage. Although the permission and future meet have me a little befuddled.

Hehe, what a cute chapter. Even though it was short, it was sweet. I had a feeling the voice in his head was more than just him, but it's got me really curious as to who, or what it could be.

Oh now you really made me curious who that voice belongs too^^ Soo can't wait^^ Another bit about shadow deamons they are emotional^^ go figure^^ Great cahpter see you again next week and Happy Easter!!!

LOL at the last part~

Yep...I wanna read more about Eoin and Freddie.

Aw. Lol cute warm & fuzzies!!! I hope we can also c mor of Freddie's POV n some chaps soon as well:-) u no its sooo weird reading this & liking it so much 4 me. Not because its not my genre, but because Brandon happens 2 b my brothers name:-/ makes it really weird when I c it, lol. Mentally I just change his name. Love this story. My only complaint is that u tend 2 jump from scene 2 scene more than flow smoothly. Also, Rhao's personality isn't really exposed beyond his infatuation 4 Brandon. Like, what r HIS interests? How old is he? How the hell do royals where he's from procreate if so few find their mate????? Is he more n2 sports or games or books or movies??? Get it??? It could b a good idea 2 spend a chapter or 2 to simply go more n depth on the AHs
Hope that helps u out. Plz, update again soon
Rukia

Funny. Will you be pairing all the algulus humanaes with someone? That would be interesting. I hope you will write more about Fred and his new man. Lol. Or perhaps you could pair all the male ones anyway, as slash is the point