rate_review Reviews

you are pure evil. what a wonderfully sad chapter. You cruel to leave it like that. My heart breaks for her. also who was that phone call from. was it the people that kidnaped her or...

I am completely frustrated with both the protagonists. I swear if I were possible to be sexually frustrated because of a story, I think I'm there. All I want them to do is have sex and love each other but it never happens! And they get so close! Please tell me they at least get to have sex once before the story ends?

Ah, the vampires have angst to...I love it. At first I thought she gave in to easily with Kendra, but you showed that she really is a natural submissive so it was believable. Good chapter, I'll be waiting for the next one.

Wow, this chapter really made me sad. She brought it on herself, but the whole thing between the two of them just saddens me. I hope the two of them work it out. On another note, bravo for telling off Kendra! But shame on you for apologizing for it girl. She deserved it, and more. She has no idea the hell she's put the two of you through. Can't wait for the next chapter, good job ^_^

I am seriously loving this story. I love the intrigue and renting between the characters. Loving your writing style. If i had to critisise one thing it would be that autum is putting up no resistance at all to what would other wize be a verry confronting situation, i hope she stands up for her self just a little bit more. But seriously can't wait for more.

Aww, can they not have sex ever? That's gonna suck...ha! Vampire pun. I should be shot for that.

1. I hate Kendra. With all the passion in my being. I really, really love the way Garrett laid into her for what she's done. I just can't understand why for the life of me Autumn would continue to be her friend! Miss Manners can call me petty all she wants but that definitely could not have been me; Kendra would've been long gone out of my life!

2. I don't even think I have a number two for this! Except that this is a really great story and that I felt everything that you described! Even the pain :( Great work!

That scene with Vlad, though. Maybe I missed something but is he uncovered and just wrapped in silks and satins...? Either way; that was a peculiar yet enticing scene!

Good story! Like Darling's internal dialog a lot, and the sexual tension with her kendra and aleksi(?) is worse then the cliffhangers I use :)
Little confused by the whole Kendra thing tough, is she related to Gregory or something?

Handy thing, that mark.

Ouch. Wanting to know more about the Dracula guy, can't wait for that tidbit. Still don't like her manipulative friend. She would no longer be my friend.