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Aww, come on Autumn, don't let it go like that.

Damn.

Whew, dang. That was a close one. I wonder if Gregory had "help" escaping?

Awwww gonna kill her off huh, or are visions just one possibility of infinite possible timelines. So now that he almost got her killed will he be less of a twit?

All I'm going to say is: I see what you did there... lol

Nice, short chapter! And yes: Kendra deserves everything that is happening to her. Wow...

I think that this has already been answered but I'll ask anyway: can servants wear their masters' colors at any given time? Like, they don't have to be around each other or attending a vampiric ceremony for the servants to wear the colors?

Uh oh...looks like its starting to get interesting now :D Not that it wasn't before.

Ah, so we finally get to why she is called a seer. I'm looking forward to finding out where this goes.

I sooooo love your story!!!!

It's about time he claimed her. It seems they have settled their differences, which is awesome. I also like that Kendra got what was coming to her. Wonder why Leslie was so calm about it though?

Okay. Wow. I mean, this is really deserving behavior towards the situation. For once, she should've listened to Miss Manners! I never realized that he never had her; I had to go back over a few chapters!

What I Liked: 1. Autumn isn't naive but she still makes decisions that make some of us go "wait... what". She's a ball of messed up emotions due to the things in her past, which makes her realistic. 2. Colette (Collette? My Chrome is putting a red squiggly line over that spelling...). And I don't care if she and Aleksi had this incest thing; she was simply adorable! Like a living doll! All while she spoke, the only thing that ran through my mind was "I WANT ONE!!" 3. Time lapses. I'm a fan of them because not every day is filled with adventure! You will have boring days and why some writers like to try to capture every moment of every day, I think it's a waste of time and words. You handled it very well and I wasn't left in the dark as far as where we were in the story.

What I Didn't Like: You already know what I'm about to say! Kendra. At first, when Autumn went on her tirade, I was celebrating but at the same time having second thoughts about my feelings for Kendra. Maybe she was a somewhat decent human being; becoming a vampire probably tuned her to that. But then when Aleksi said that her and Tristen knew? It only became even more proof of how cold-hearted and worthless she really is! She had the nerve to smile at her?! ARGH!!!

That's about it. I know; not much of an actual critique! I can't do those too well... all I know is that I love this story!