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Aww, why doesn't he just turn her then?

You are so mean but thank you for not killing Leslie she's my favorite. I kinda hate Autumn because she's so meek and weak sometimes I just want to strangle her. Submissives aren't weak girl get your head outta your ass and get your man back! She's so frustrating.

Ohhhhhhhhhh, choppy choppy....and a shooting to come LOL I can't wait to see how her stopping this makes it all worse!

Brutal. Wonder if the baby is gonna live?

Just finished chapter 8 and gotta say, I'm not liking Alexsi very much right now...He better do something to redeem himself or he's gonna stay on my s***list :P

So mean...almost had her say the words then put them back together again, LOL. So I guess you're not as mean to your MC's as you say. Good chapter, like the forshadow cliffhanger...hmmmm, whose getting shot?

I always enjoy it when this story updates, it leaves me guessing what's gonna happen next.

Okay. How am I supposed to review this when my mouth has dropped?? I didn't review the other chapters because... I don't know. Let's just say that I am so glad that I took a chance and went through the Promote a Story two months ago!

I love how every chapter, we get this jaw dropping reveal thrown at us (well, it's jaw dropping for me)! If this was an actual paperback, I would've thrown it across the room several times, chanting "Nope. Nope. I'm done" only to continue to read it ten seconds later!

I guess that's why I haven't commented/reviewed every single chapter because that's how I feel about each one.

I am so glad that Aleksi has finally questioned Autumn's "loyalty" to Kendra. Because I don't get it. Even after she learned from Leslie that Kendra was never a friend, she still feels pity for her. Okay, we can argue that an eye for an eye isn't the right way or even that we shouldn't treat people like crap just because they do the same. But, come on! There are times when you just have to cut people away from your life, especially if they're nothing but toxic! Autumn's fault is that she likes to see the good in someone, no matter what. At least when it comes to her "friends". Because let me tell you! Had I been Autumn, Garrett and Kendra would've been gone (well... before I found out that Garrett couldn't truly help how he was acting. But still, it would've been a very slow process to let him back into my life...)!

See? This is what good stories do to me. I'm fuming over the actions of fictional characters...

I hate Kendra. I had a friend like her once which only makes me hate Alexsi even more even if he is under orders to fuck her it still pisses me off. Autumn should smother that bitch in her bed then kick Alexsi's ass. Just my thoughts on the first three chapters. It's good so far but brings out my violent side apparently. :)

CL

Soooo, she's getting stronger and he's getting weaker, interesting turn...does Autumn get a pet vampire LOL