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October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay, done the whole thing. I don't like first person stories, but I squished that down just so I could read your story because it's gooood. THANK YOU for writing it. It started out a little purple, but you worked that out on your own, all in all, a good read, but you leave the reader going "Where's the next page" in a very incomplete way, I hope you wrap it up in the second part
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
An interesting premis, vampires as dancers. Makes sense, I'm writing a fanfic with an ex vampire as a stripper who's unusually graceful because of his vamp history, so I like it. It's a little flowery for me, and I find myself skipping parts of description just to get to the actual story, but maybe that's because I'm impatient? Anyways, off to read more!
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter! Okay, I don't like first person. I really really don't like it. But I'm squishing that down and just enjoying the story. The flowery prose is cut down in the second chapter, much more story, much less prose, enjoying the read! Thank you!
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three, things are heating up! I'm a little confused that Aleksi would openly kiss her in the theatre they're practicing in where another vampire is more apt to go, instead of a quick peck in the hall where her apartment and the biotch's apartment are, but such it is to see it from the outside, for all I know they've got the place bugged out already!
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4, I do hope things end well for Aleksi.
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
Okay, I don't want to read three months of lamenting, I really hope I'm not about to read three months of lamenting, because that's not my bag of tricks.
Okay, I don't want to read three months of lamenting, I really hope I'm not about to read three months of lamenting, because that's not my bag of tricks.
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July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loved the story, started out angry at the Autumn Character but really like her now, she's tough and endures everything thrown at her. So pissed at Aleksi, I'd castrate the whiny bastard but he needs to grow a pair - what a wimpy vampire! "Oh I have to let her go to protect her oh woe is me!" Like she cares about the danger! Grrrrr, he so pisses me off, like a woman can't decide for herself! Ok, enough ranting. Great story and can't wait to read the seqeul. - Suzy
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July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow, this was amazing. Probably the best I've read in a long time. I love all the characters and how autumn is actually able to be be so unsure and loveable at the same time.
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May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm she needs to start eating tons of garlic! Wanna snack Aleksi? Mwahahaha
So gotta wake up Vlad, guys been asleep long enough, time to have some fun!
So gotta wake up Vlad, guys been asleep long enough, time to have some fun!
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April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an abrupt and out of nowhere ending. Wasn't expecting that. I look forward to part 2 to figure out what the hell's going on. For sequel name ideas, it's hard to think of any without knowing what it's about...Danse Magic? Gonna get a lot of Bowie jokes about that one though. Danse Servant? Blood Danse? I got nothing, sorry.