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Very interesting look forward to more! G

Well I've read all four chapters so far and I'm enjoying your story so far.... You should get a beta to work with you on your story they can help with spelling, grammar and story idea's especially if you get writers block. I love the idea of him being into martial arts and the whole eye's thing he's got going on. I can't stand Carrie she need's to go or you need to make is so she's possessed by something bad or Roxy needs to set her ass straight. It's a lil hard to read your story when words are missing or you've jumped to another place in the story. Don't get me wrong I just mentally fix it but still try to do a lil proof reading before you go to far into the story. I look forward to reading about the sleep over....

I like how this is going. I'm wondering how you will get aeton and avery together or will there be another and aeton is the main antagonist,? I guess I"ll find out

Ok. you got me. I'm intrigued.