rate_review Reviews

Hi dear.thanks for the update.well im really not fond of every ch a new character but I somehow like this new Alex guy. Maybe he could be a good friends for Josh.God knows he needs that.
And thanks for your explanation at the end.that really helped.

Oh my poor Josh got beaten again. Sahar why are you doing this to him?
But I'm curious to know who was that new guy.and I'm glad that you said we will have more plot cause I hope to see more of Sahar/Amir/Kafir give and take. Their relationships are so interesting for me.
Thank you for update and well done.

Oh sorry I forgot to say I like to have an explanation every chapter about anything that you think can be confusing for us.
Thanks again.

Hi dear and thanks for ur update.well i personally like to Have AN every ch.but i dont know about others. Some might find it interesting and and for some it could be boring.but i dont think A brief short note would bother anyone.right? And about names u know its natural in some cultures a name can be for a girl and in another culture it can named a boy. Its kinda interesting. Im from midle east too.and i know here many cultures and languages effect each other in different ways through the history so we can have same name for girls and boys here and there.no problem.
And now lets go to the story.well honestly this ch isn't one of my favorites.But at first i want to say something in general about the story.
some times in some chs i can't find the relation between events .it seems there isn't a main plot in background.a main plot that can guide the story and readers.
I mean There are many smaller plot or events that should lead us to for instance understand something or get some feeling or cause our mind to connect the dots and reach the main plot but as i said in some chs all these smaller events don't make much sense and at least readers can't find the connections.
So instead it gets confusing.and a new character every other ch won't help either. Specially when we dont get more information about them in later chs.we cant find much about them not through Josh narration,not through the conversation.
This ch is one of that confusing one. and beating again? I mean u marked Josh as a free spirit.we love him for his kinda recklessness and boldness.im not sure beating could develope his relationship.

O.o ?? Did they had sex ?? I'm sorry to tell it's not clear ^^''
You left us hanging in the end of the last chapter with heavy kissing and... Well... I don't know...
I read it twice and I really don't know. I must say I'm a little disappointed.
But just a little because I love your characters and the plots !!
Soooo, I'm going to wait for the next chapter and more explanations :))

Chapter wonderful, as always! Now, it's starting the good part: the interaction between the pair <3

Oh i check AFF every day for this story now.Please update.I really want to know what will happen after that kiss.They countinue or one or both of them snap out of it?

please update soon I love this story

An editor to fix mistakes would take this to the next level. All of this violence and abuse turning into something romantic though is not so great. I like the idea and the characters but these interactions are disgusting if you expect your readers to believe that after this abuse that these men will have a love affair. It could work if you built it slowly and let the reader see the progression through Josh mind. At the moment it doesn't make sense and you're at a point where you can slow it down to a more realistic point. Please don't make this nice story into some kind of Stockholm syndrome love obsession where this guy in charge regularly beats his mate at his whim. That's disgusting even when it's two men.

Hi again.i wanted to say your recomended stories are my favorites.no wonder i like your story.lol.
Waiting for your next update. Thank you.