rate_review Reviews

I love this chapter. It's like a break in Josh misery. :)
But I suspect it's not going to last... It's going to kill Josh if something happened to his brother !
Waiting impatiently for the next uptade 😍

Och god, was that a bomb? Ronny was so close to the car, is he going to be ok D: ?
I love your story I read it from the start but decided to finally review it. Thank you for cultural notes they help with claryfing some of the things.
I like Josh and feel bad for him when everyone do wathever thay want and expect him to just accept it. Also I love how intense are moment with Sahar.

I'll try to review it later as I see I hardly wrote anything =="

Uh oh. I hope the car didn't explode :(

Oh s i t someone just got killed

I 'm waiting for the punishment of Josh . Sahar will be brutal . I think the punishment should be exemplary. Let broken on the edge of death and scars which then embarrassed Josh . I hope the upgrade.

Am I Supposed To Love sahar cause I really hate him. Please dont make josh so weak that he beg sahar everytime to fuck him. Sahar should show some love for him first!

OH MY GOD

IT WAS GREAT GREAT GREAT , I AM A BAD PERSON BECAUSE I LOVE SAHAR SO MUCH?????

OH GOD JOSH IS GOING TO BE IN SO MUCH TROUBLE

Uh oh, this will not end well.

Those two are so funny ! :) At least in the first part of the chapter, before Sahar behave like a jerk !!
Thanks for the new update ! Great chapter.

I don't know how to emotionally connect with this story... I found myself hooked by the beginning but now I'm repelled by both the sociopathic and sadistic tendencies of Sahar. If the direction that this story is going to take results in constant humiliation and pain for Josh then please tell me now so that I can escape relatively unscathed...unlike Josh. Sahar may have awakened a masochistic yen in Joshua but his pointless cruelty only serves to make me and apparently his "captive" feel demeaned and degraded. I want Joshua to be strong and not broken, I want him to stand up to Sahar and I want Joshua to feel as if his life has not been destroyed... Ok, that is a lot of "I wants" and who the Hell am I? You're the very talented author and I am just a wuss who finds humiliation a turn off. *shrugs* I want (Oh No,Again!) to love this fic...the premise is so intriguing and you are a fine writer. I just don't know........