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August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ronny is alive ! Great ! :)
Thank you for the new chapter and I can't wait for more... :))
Thank you for the new chapter and I can't wait for more... :))
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August 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The end of this chapter, while I'm not 100% sure what causes Josh to start crying, felt like it hit home somehow
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August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter :)
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August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter ! Thanks for the fast update.
I like the last sentence. It made me smile. :))
I like the last sentence. It made me smile. :))
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August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The story is so good, without the plot the sex scenes wouldn't be as good, just because of the weird love/hate relationship Josh has going on with Sahar. I'm really glad Josh remembers what happened. Though I am now way more worried about Ronny...
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August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!.. your story changes the rhythm among this site's postings.. you are breaking patterns here.. is it a high influx of harsh realities mushed up together? or is it something else altogether about the content? you know action around Tel-Aviv just does not see the light here..
Whatever you are weaving, seems to me very concentrated, exotic, very engaging, intriguing, shocking.. like seeing a violent crime scene for the first time.. ok I've made my mind.. violence, brute strength, the plot has a lot of violence, it hits me on every level.. it raises all my safe defences.. Sahar - Josh are almost a natural source of dynamic tension.. :)) but they are very interesting characters on their own.. ..they follow the harsh land somehow..
While rearing Under Blue Skies, I find that I am often surprised and delighted but how things turn out.. I did not think about this or that but oh my..
You have talent and more.. ..a big thank you for your effort.. may you find high rewards in everything you do!
Whatever you are weaving, seems to me very concentrated, exotic, very engaging, intriguing, shocking.. like seeing a violent crime scene for the first time.. ok I've made my mind.. violence, brute strength, the plot has a lot of violence, it hits me on every level.. it raises all my safe defences.. Sahar - Josh are almost a natural source of dynamic tension.. :)) but they are very interesting characters on their own.. ..they follow the harsh land somehow..
While rearing Under Blue Skies, I find that I am often surprised and delighted but how things turn out.. I did not think about this or that but oh my..
You have talent and more.. ..a big thank you for your effort.. may you find high rewards in everything you do!
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July 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope this comment makes you jump in your seat! Haha! Awesome chapter! I can't believe that happened to Josh! Crazy, but I love it! Some people are scared of mutilating their main characters so its rare to see that kind of realism. Thanks for the update!
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July 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I had a suspicion there was a bomb triggered at the end of the chapter 19... so I was delaying reading this chapter. I am going to assume Ronnie died in the explosion as I think he was closer to the car then Josh.
Josh sure seems to have some unresolved PSTD type issues from his military service. This was the second episode he has had so far. Combine those flashbacks and those which are tied together with all his family issues he is one messed up person.
Sahar may or may not be a good thing in Josh's life, but eventually he should become a stronger and more stable person.
Looking forward to seeing more chapters.
Josh sure seems to have some unresolved PSTD type issues from his military service. This was the second episode he has had so far. Combine those flashbacks and those which are tied together with all his family issues he is one messed up person.
Sahar may or may not be a good thing in Josh's life, but eventually he should become a stronger and more stable person.
Looking forward to seeing more chapters.
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July 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! No, no, no. Daes that mean that Ronny is dead?
Against all hope, I hope in a miracle... Josh will be so broken. Sahar's gentleness in this chapter was heartwarming. Thanks for the update
Against all hope, I hope in a miracle... Josh will be so broken. Sahar's gentleness in this chapter was heartwarming. Thanks for the update
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July 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is so great ! I guess he had the nightmare when they operate his legs ?
His mind knows something is happening.
Yes, this chapter is captivating. Thank you for sharing. :)
It's good (for now) that he doesn't remember his brother... I'm afraid of the worst...
His mind knows something is happening.
Yes, this chapter is captivating. Thank you for sharing. :)
It's good (for now) that he doesn't remember his brother... I'm afraid of the worst...