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Sadly this is officially the last chapter I am going to bother with... for now... I do love your writing but I find Josh to be getting increasingly annoying.... and pathetic. If he is upset he should be able to say he's pissed that they let him get raped or that they are letting his brother die or whatever upsets him... and instead of telling them he is just stomping his feet. And it's old. And now after being raped he is being gagged and it's all because he couldn't call them out for the right reason... if he has the balls to call them out then seriously why not have the balls to say why he's calling them out.... We are something like 23 chapters in with him being near these people regularly and yet he hasn't learned a damn thing.... I feel like I am half way through a book with no clear idea of the plot yet... And it's sad cus I love Sahar and the other characters... but only following Josh at this point is off putting...

But it's so WELL WRITTEN. I love the way you are so good at writing... I just am over the primary POV. So definitely not because I dislike the story... I just don't get how someone who calls out a mobster can be so... same as he started with no understanding... he doesn't even bide his time. I really am beginning to hate Josh and I am afraid that if I keep reading I will loather and abhor him and so for that... I will be spending time away from the story...

But I hope you finish it and that it turns out exactly as intended and that it remains god smackingly glorious in writing and idea.

Where the hell was the chick during all of this? Is she in on it?

I forgot to tell you that your new digital art on tumblr is absolutly gorgeous ! Thanks for sharing !

Another amazing chapter ! Wow ! So much violence but really well written ! :))
We learn a little about what's happend to Josh. Poor guy !
Waiting impatiently for the next chapter... :)

I have to admit I could not finish reading chapter 23 ... it was too hard reading about Josh being tortured. I skimmed the last part to see how chapter 23 ended and was not sure if I could continue to follow this story. I was holding out for the next chapter before making an decision... I know that Sahar is an abusive jackass to Josh, but it as a completely different feel to it. I fully admit I wanted to have Josh be okay and to have an at least somewhat happy ending. I was content with what happened in Chapter 24... so maybe now I can go back and finishing reading chapter 23.

Have to agree with Josh ... WTF was Eliza doing this entire time? Unless she is unconscious or lying dead somewhere you would think she would have investigated all the noise from Josh's room.

I don't know if anyone knows what is happening in this story any more? Events just happen and people come and go without any connection to eachother or without explaining anything. there used to be some characters that seemed to play main rols like Amir but after more than 20 chapters who knows who he is really? There is no plot and events just happen. Josh constantly gets hurt and faint and goes black and then again comes to life and does the same things again.

Oh no ! Don't tell me he cut Josh's finger !!?
What a psycho ! Josh is surrounded by them ! lol
I like his inner dialogue. It's very funny. :)
Until next chapter...

"cut him a fucking break" see what i did there ironic hahaha awsome chapter josh is breaking nd bad glad to see glimses of his actitud bad how longer will it take i wonder

I just started reading this story, I'm on chapter 8 now and it's sooooo good! How didn't I found this before? It's awesome, I really like stories placed in different places than the usual.

I really enjoy reading this story, and it's super interesting! I love Sahar so much ahah, and I saw your art for him and it's seriously beautiful. Can't wait to read more!