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for Under Blue Skies

by Lavi1443

person Ichimaru
schedule November 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I realy love your story but i cant love sahar. I always like mean characters but he isnt just mean. He is a bastard. I want him to suffer for what he’s done. Instead of hurting poor josh hurt that bastard please.just for one time make him regret what he's done.
person Lunar
schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter. I want to see how the main character develops and becomes stronger even though the other guy is so mean, I hate him and love him at the same time that I want them together. However, you always make it so unpredictable and a another reason for my love of this story so carry on the good work X
person Ushered
schedule November 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story what is your updating schedule?
person miles
schedule November 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad for him... Sahar really doesn't care for him...
But Josh is stronger than everybody think, right ?
Can't wait for more :)
Thanks for the new chapter
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh pleased dont leave it there wanna know what happends i so love this story this cliffy is killing me
person miles
schedule November 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the late review.
I really hope you won't give up ! I like Josh and his weirdness ! :))
Take care...
person Shahi
schedule November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank u for update.don't forget that you have fans waiting for you :)
person KC
schedule October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see you plan on continuing this story, it is frustrating to get emotionally invested in a set of characters and to have a story stop before an ending is reached.

Not that everything needs to be resolved, but it would be nice to see Josh and Sahar get some closure wit there relationship.
person S
schedule October 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!Read it all in one sitting and cannot wait for more.
person miles
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So Eliza is dead. I was wondering why she didn't help Josh. ^^'
Sahar really isn't very understanding with Josh. After all he's hurt a lot !
And he's going to be pissed with Amir...
Thanks for the new chapter :))